I just read the prologue, the condition of the main character is really concerning, your writing is really neat, and the emotional delivery you give is really felt, totally realistic. keep fighting bro!

Good work author keep it up,i think this story has potential but there are too few chapters to judge so if author keeps up this quality I will increase the Rating ☺️

Nice story and plot it needs some push a little bit but i am thinking this story has a lot of potential looking forward to this story and world building of this story is quite good

Good work, the characters are very fun, the fights are well organized but need more chapters and have some hearts and love I want love in the story 😂

Impressed. I believe your work has great potential and I’d love to help showcase it through story art animation and i can also help you to reach a wider audience . Additionally, do you have other social media accounts where I can connect with you? You can find me on Instagram and discord :@book_blaze.

Hi everyone.  First time Author here so please bear with me.The action in this story doesn't start until around 45 chapters, your criticisms are more than welcome as they'll help me improve. Thank you.

Top notch . Keep at it author! ..I need more updates

Delete my old comment cuz its getting drowned o(￣┰￣*)ゞjust want to say that this novel has already reach the end of Volume 2I'll read your suggestion and criticism, give me a review if you like my book（；´д｀）ゞ

A História é muito boa, prende do começo ao fim. Tem, claro , algumas partes mais lentas, mas são poucas e não são inúteis. O final foi meio apressado.

It is one of the best stories I have ever read. I still check from time to time if there is any update. May the author get well soon and hope he continues this story.

I will wait for more chapters , author your better not stop now.

Let’s keep this going…got good potential