Yup it is childish! But maybe it's too early to judge, but I feel like the story will grow into a boring piece, you still have time you can work and come up with a better story, as the story is in its beginning stage I give it at least a 3 star because there are chances for both upliftment and failure

This is what I think so far:1.Anyways the novel is some peak lvl compared to the usual novels u find on wn these days .2.There's no harem in it so a plus point.3.The MC is sensible enough and not like your average beta and brain-dead MCs.4. The characters are good so far, all are likeable.

I‘ve read up to the 5th Chapter “Barbarians“, and until now, there are not many mistakes made and the writing style is pretty good. The charakter design is also very detailed and I hope there will be more Chapters released and he doesn‘t drop it anytime soonPlease keep up the good work

"I just finished reading your novel, and I’m honestly blown away. The way you’ve crafted the story is nothing short of amazing. From the very first page, I was hooked. The plot is so engaging and full of twists and turns that I couldn’t put it down. The characters feel so real—each one with depth and complexities that made me care about them deeply. Your writing style is beautiful, flowing effortlessly and pulling me into the world you’ve created. I was constantly surprised by how you balanced suspense and emotion, keeping me on the edge of my seat one moment and bringing me to tears the next. It’s clear you’ve poured your heart into this story, and it truly shows. I can’t wait to see where this journey takes you next. Keep writing, you’ve got something special here!

ABSOLUTE. CINEMA.                                                                                                                                         

Damien's life is hella dramatic 😂his living more than me, i do love a good old revenge so I'm excited author.

Loving this book - eight hot girls trained in seduction and martial arts, FL, Delphi, is a sexy, bad-aXX leader, doing the #enemiestolovers dance with ML Alton Meyer. She pretends (keeping us guessing author???) to be submXXssive to keep him panting. He plans to infiltrate the Guerilla Girls with his guards - a reverse honey trap - what could go wrong? The girls are getting everything they want from the boys, and the boys are pretty happy with that arrangement... Can't wait to see how this plays out and the girls' revenge against the dirty old Emperor. Keep up the good work author!Smut starts at chapter 15 for those who use the dark arts [fast forward ;)].

Amazing and interesting 😍😍 highly recommend

Woooh!!!This is a great novel. I don't know how I stumbled upon it, but since I started reading it. I was drawn into a new different world, with a whole new touch of fantasy and everything in between. I love it and I recommend it to anyone out there looking for an amazing novel to read.Please, author we need more updates. Thank you!!!

Good work author, nice original plot from a common reborn theme, nice characters, good writing style.Keep up the good work for your readers, because there is.

First time writing a review, but this underrated gem deserves it, I started with low expectations but ended suprised on how unique this story feels. Specially the mc and his obsession with ‘normalcy’ that makes him borderline insane.

the book is great , does the author have any discord ???