Etarion Online: Rise of the Void Sovereign

does the writing improve at all later on and stop feeling so rushed and all over the place? asking because it would be a shame to give up on a book with such a fun concept to it

the concept is fantastic but mc is what i guess not smart and little bit arrogant..................................................m..tiditst9do

The story was really good. But then the MC went FULL harem mode. I don't know why the author did this. He even made the MC feel bad for cheating on his girlfriend. but then he continued to cheat on her with other girls.For some reason the 'american' girls became okay with it. Well, i am dropping this at this point. Read till chapter 450 i think. This review is for anyone who thinks this is not a harem. It is. It is a harem.

This is a great novel with an suberb world building, The cliche is barely minimum and the story  is awesome  , the author focus on every character present  , very less mistakes which will annoy you but one thing that i would like to change about this novel is  making  only one main character and making him a lil highlighted that would make this a polished gem   really a very good xanxia   loving this  the  updating stability need to be increased a lil  ( I would recommend you to try this novel if you are a fan of xanxia  thanks

Thank you author for your effort and this story. The story kept me going chapter after chapter. I have yet to finish hence picking it up to my reading list and dropping you my review. Here are my comments1. The whole story built up is commendable - truly well done from the start of how villin witnessed the death of the boy’s parents and taken in by the Silver to how he was trained until he enter the academy. The background to him attaining the different level of knowlege of a magus is well described 2. Creativity in plot and ability to draw the description of scenes allowing users to visualise clearly. As i read the chapters i am able to visualize each scene clearly. Eg. how the academy looks like, the classes, the time when Villin touch the crystal to his awakening, the corridor to the classes, the battle between Aiden and Amelia, the attack from Rolland to Villin - i could visualise it clearly as a result of the vivid description including the “test” set out by Pompei for his students how the fire ball went towards Kayley and Villin. Also the part where Villin fixed the crystal holder in class.3. Content structure. It takes a lot to think through the content for such magical realm and world - this is done well and delivered effectively by the author from the use of wands, to web nodes awakening to wandless curses and spells. The classes and grades and lessons that are taught - i enjoy reading and deciphering these content. 4. Peak and story climax - i am reading from competitive student battle (aiden and amelia, Villin and his oponent on crease and cut) more and more exciting part from attacks to battles and surprises - this leaves readers stuck on the narrative turning one chapter to another - good manouvering on the plot leaving trails of excitement here and there. Absolutely a must read for Harry Porter fans alike or magical fantasy - great built up of the entire world of magic. Look forward to read how Villin’s character will further evolve into and perhaps mega battle of the magical kingdom and forces to come. Good job author in putting in the effort for book. Keep up the good work!

"Writerz!" I turned to right side but didn't see Writerz, also the other side and then I realized that Brog wasn't there either. My brain immediately analyzed that Writerz just used me and Kenji for his safety. I never expexpect if Writerz was a good child.

I was walking for about an hour finding nothing until I heard a twig snap. I instantly get myself ready for what is to come. Out comes 5 little goblins.

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