Hook 🪝, line & sinker . Now could you update the book 📖

A Novel with rich literal content , it has good story development and wide universal setting .....I'm the author of this novel , let me take you through the lens of time to the Primordial era , When God's were yet born and the Heavens were established

signing a contract so soon is a bad thing author ngl cause most of us don't pay to read you should've had made a patron till 200-300 chapters and then signed it cause no way many gonna buy the series to read 20 chapters hope you understand the mistake btw haven't read it but hope you make it🤞

This is amazing!! I can’t wait for more!!

it's good but has room for improvement. please decrease update intervals

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The story isin a complex and gritty world. The writing is detailed and insightful. I believe some parts could be clearer and easier to follow thoughThe dialogue is strong, with characters feeling realistic and unique. The way they react to the challenges around them helps the reader understand their personalities and struggles. The pacing is mostly solid, but a few scenes are dragged a LOT. And although the world-building is rich it gets a little overwhelming with all the details, makiug it hard to keep track of everything.It could be a bit more streamlined, but overall, it’s an engaging story with strong potential.

can't wait to read it 🤩🤩🤩🤩 you should read it

hands down one of the best sports novel out there... heck maybe even number 1 basketball novel in my list. the MC's personality is just chef's kiss... even though it has a system, it didn't feel like that OP like you posterize or even dominate every single team out there. also the friendship is also on this novel. and quite romance in it also. this novel is all rounder in terms of sports, and slice of life. i just don't know why this novel hasn't gotten popular with how much reviews has in this novel.summary, this novel is a high recommended if you like sports, and slice of life. go read it!

After reading all the free chapters, I can say that this novel is heading in a different direction from what I expected but in a good way... Also I was attracted by the Novel's title... it made me so curious that I had to check and... I made the best choice to read it... It's good... that is all I can say since I only read till the free chapters... I hope the author updates this daily so that I can read it... All the best author 🙂u200d↕️

interesting. could go either way. Char seems realistic to today's youth, but will the fast pace, short scenes be too confusing  I guess it's perfect for today's youth though where it is proven they cannot pay attention as long anf will lose interest quicker.

I'm greedy. I just want more ☺☺☺☺keep it up