To support my story so I am giving a review by myself . And I hope other people's also like this story and it's story line and support me. and give me feedback so i get more motivation so i will be able to improve my storyline more

Hello everyone! For those who have read from the first chapters released, know that I cut the first 9 chapters to make the story flow more smoothly. Let me know what you think! Don't worry, I will introduce Niko's past later!Thanks for your attention and happy reading to all!

Ah, lust, that age-old sin that men (and women) can't seem to stop. Now, if you're an avid follower of me, you'll know that I would never recommend this to anyone due to the evil nature inside these pages. Ya know: devils, sacrifices, and rituals. Notwithstanding, Zexusgo seems to wish to refine their writing craft. Let's see if we can give him pointers.So the story takes place in this fantasy world that centers on betrayal, transformation, and some survival. Zexusgo employs LITRPG mechanics, so it's clear where this story is headed.Ishar (the MC) is basically sacrificed to a devil (Satanic) by his comrades, which is where his journey begins. Zexusgo does a great job pacing things; we'll give him that. I think it's due to the LITRPG aspect because his action scenes are interesting enough to understand.Do we like Ishar? Heck no. Haha. He's a little complex that struggles too much after transforming. That's good, though, because it allows readers to understand him more. I favour Kael more. That or Rudrik. So you better not slack off on them, Zexusgo.Here are the things to improve on: explaining the LITRPG system so readers aren't lost on Ishar's ability sets, a better background to understand why Ishar was betrayed, and better dialogue (since they seem forced).This is Akito, hoping those who are lost may come to Jesus Christ as their Lord and Saviour.

Fascinating read, writer seems to be following the classic route for the whole revenge - reactivated path for web novels, the setting is refreshing and the text is so elegant! Plot could be better and the tempo is a bit slow though

A few chapter in and its a great book so far. Love the description and characters. Kudos to you author😍

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Your novel has potential, though I only read till 7 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....

I'm not shameless i just wanna give a good review and don't mind my writing im new at this

The author sure knows how to keep her readers engaged. All the best!

I like the concept it's a great novel for those interested in war or action novel although it's still ongoing but I feel it's going to worth my time I'm hoping for a bit of romance...

A Around of applause to you author, readers the book is worth reading don't scroll pass it it else you will miss.

The start is soooo good. Creates a whole vivid scene for your imagination. Love the vocab. 💜