Lost Lines of a Starry Abyss

Don't pick this up. This great book has been ruined by a crappy translator. It's not worth the distress. The translator disappears for weeks at a time, never communicates with the fan base, and just recently skipped 5 chapters. I've held on for a long time, hoping the translator will get better, but I'm finally dropping it for good.

as a brand new story that I have read on here, it has really caught my interest. I've only read a few chapters and I look forward to maybe read more.

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God dude. Brain dead. The amount of face-slapping is dumb. Ao Cheng, the second character is so dumb that they try to justify it. I don't know how I got to chapter 122. It was a waste of coins tbh. The System this thing talks about doesn't appear for 50 chapters, and the choices the mc picks are bad. Don't waste your time on this one.

Hey author, I hope you're still here, and I hooe you remember me. While you had dropped this story, I also hope you dont mind I made a story on Wattpad(I know, the gayish story app, but still has gold within a pile of pup) based on your story, but get rid of the cringe misogynist of poor writing villains and add more plot and twist, more chapters, more world building, more magic, more battles, and MORE SLAUGHTER FOR THE HUMANS!Yeah, I just increased the difficulty level. While gate is easy level, japan summons is mid level, your story is at the hard level, mine just straight up Dark Souls level.Just imagine fighting against a kilometer size sea monster, 5 demon lords, and Orcs that can walk on water like jesus. Yeah, thats what im going to do.And if you like to, you can check it out

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Overall, love the idea but room for improvement.Great story, quirky charakters and a light, fun reading. Grammer errors here and there but it doesn't affect the understanding.Some chapters feel like going too fast...how to say, tmi, it just feels as if you get a bunch of things tossed at you, when it could have been paced slower, with more love for smaller details in it to feel the atmosphere without having to focus on a bunch of other equally important and interesting happenings. ATM at chapter 21

This is early to review but here I am. The novel has similar vibes to Pocket hunting dimension but story line is very different. The mystery to the dimension where MC goes isn't solved yet. The general outline is MC one fine day finds himself in a new world after his "death". MC feels he transmigrated. He has a system which helps MC to get stronger. During one of the missions MC dies and he finds himself back in his real world. He now thinks that everything might be a dream but isn't able to convince himself. When he goes to sleep(iirc) he again finds himself in this new world where he levels up. Behind the scenes MC is a young master of a very very powerful god clan I guess. Gears of fate and destiny are into play. MC was one of the most OP characters in past and although he successfully reincarnated he does not have his old memories yet. His mother father and retainers after confirming that MC is back again are gonna start a war, a war on the universe level I guess. So I have hopes that if author can continue this story it is gonna be a super bad ass action in future. Till now MC isn't OP. Just a normal level up thing going on and recently he received his bloodline or class I guess. Keep writing author.