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ElIgor
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- July 1,2024
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Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
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Honestly really nice.Besides the grammar errors, and the lack of dialogue (which is made up for by all the infor we're given), it has a really cool start.The author could try mixing all of the background information while advancing the plot though.
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writing this review after ch 18 and You may be thinking that this novel is pretty slow that is because I don't rush things and slowly introduce more characters and more power system and need to make that system is not too op and if you have any questions about the novel feel free to comment and read until the chapter 18.
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since it's my story, I had to put 5 stars if yall have any questions ask me.
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I'll finally give myself 5 stars, like other authors do.Why am I writing this now? To inform you about my, at first, inconsistent writing style. Initially, I used my work as a progression tracker, but now I feel some connection with it.Really, I wanted to improve my writing with this being a 'side project', and it is visible each chapter.Spacing, vocab, logic, character development, and, mainly, the thoughts and feelings deepness — everything improves steadily, at some point I dare to say exponentially.When you start reading my work, please, bare with the pacing and, sometimes, unusual writing style. I feel the story itself evolves quite well and also develops significantly more in the future chapters.
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What can I say...Oh yeah, this novel is great the only problem is that the mc is like really OP!(that's not really a problem🤪)
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Eu dou 5 estrelas porque fui eu que criei o livro e posso dizer o quanto trabalhei e dei tudo de mim para criar uma novel que ninguém nunca criou e posso dizer que ela será uma das melhores novel que existe.
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Great storytelling. I love the idea of multiverses and can't wait to read more and learn about the characters and different worlds created in this book.
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I like each and every character. Fight scene, are actually fun and it’s so smooth and I get lose while reading it. Also love Austin
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Hey 👋 Author here!What happens when a regular guy gets a summoning system, but with a twist? Elias is just trying to live his life, but his newfound powers open doors to dangerous challenges and wild adventures. With the ability to summon incredible creatures, he's about to face battles that will push him to his limits. But not everything is as it seems... will Elias survive the chaos, or will his power become his downfall?I’ll be updating the story as much as I can, and I’d love to hear what you think! Feel free to leave feedback and tell me what you’d like to see next!
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At this rate I can't help but leave a review. I'm only 17 chapters into the story but I'm already in love with this novel !❤️ . Thanks so much author for this gripping suspenful story . I can't wait to know why Cora is in her mask .
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I have never left a review before but I am glad i read this book,it is good the writing is super notch, a chapter leaves you imagining what's going to happen next and leaves you craving for more, the characters are interesting Am glad I didn't give up 🥰 despite the waiting and I hope you continue to update daily can't wait to read it all. XOXO🥰
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