To the Wretched

I feel for lyra

Do you know how a lot of people complain about OP characters not having any substance? this is NOT that! the plot is SO THICC. the characters are memorable and feel alive. The Mc has common sense and doesn't ever NOT do something the for BS plot reasons (You know when a characters has an ability that would solve gis problems but doesn't use it because the plot needs him to struggle or whatever? none of that) also  190 chapters in and a ship had finally sailed all and all 9½/10

I first thought that it would be just *** and the story will lag, but surprisingly the story is more interesting and the plot holds itself, the *** stuff is secondary. Characters are well developed and even the tertiary characters are nicely portrayed which in turn seamlessly binds the story, plot and the characters.Thank you for writing this.

Original name: Nine Star Poisonous MilkCurrently, the novel is very famous in China. Ranked at 15th position of male category. 5 stars totally deserved! Hope this comes out as soon as possible!

It is good and refreshing for a wuxia novel. The system is new and development pace is good too. The story is well balanced ................

It's nice seeing such great originals from time to time.Honestly, I suck at writing these, I'm already way past my limitations. Any lo-140!

Amazing.I don't know how much research you have to do to write some of these chapters but I think it's a lot, thank you for it.This novel might seem mundane and boring but it's just the daily life of a person that was born with a difficult to use system and for some reason I find that notion very appealing.Thanks for the novel, keep up the good work.

Hi everyone, Author here.I am not comfortable giving reviews on my own work, it feels a lot like self adulation to me (Which I've always likened to narcissism.)Anyways let's go to the reason why you are here. The book. Er... no, the review for the book.The Primordial Record is not a fast paced book. But because it's a web novel, I tried to skim across overly long descriptions, to make a tighter story. I may have failed, you my dear readers would be the judge of that.Based on the settings of my book, which is Transmigration. The MC is swamped in a flood of deceit and lies. And because I made him overpowered, I had to balance that with really dangerous enemies, that understands the capabilities of the MC and make every confrontation a deadly affair. I abhor weak and stupid antagonist.From the start he would be placed in a unfavorable position and he would need every wit and cunning he possess to win.I would not be leaving obvious hints, I left many Setups and I trust my readers to figure them out as they proceed with the story, for I am a fan of puzzles, and if you stick around long enough, I hope you would be surprised by the Payoffs.The Primordial Record may not be an easy book to read, and I sincerely apologize for that. I left details of certain abilities and the world itself vague, as it is a huge world and I dont like info-dumps. There are many horrifying themes presented inside and spoilers warning. I am willing to kill off characters, if it would serve the story.I hope you enjoy this world. Because ultimately that is the reason I write. For your pleasure. Bricktrader.