I enjoy this story very much, however, there are two points that stick out to me. First, Lyra's characterization.Even in the prologue, when you think about it, the author described Lyra, or Reinst at the time as calm or serious. Yet, her thought process was anything but that. Her thought process had a tehe~ kind of tone which seemed very unsuited for how she was described.After reincarnation, her characterization didn't seem to click exactly. Even if she is a child, or is to show more childlike behaviour, she should still show signs of her past life traits other than knowledge Second, the addition of modern technology and entertainment. I mean, it's nice to blend science and magic, but this wasn't blended particularly well...With science, they mention stem cell donation. However, they mention no other scientific achievements or tools? What? Maybe my memory is bad or I missed it, but are there really no other achievements in science? It doesn't even need to be stated outright, they could just be using a scientific tool or something. Also, they mentioned there being anime, manga and light novels or something of similar content. Yet it isn't even mentioned or implied that others read/watch them. It seems as though their only purpose is to make references and jokes that would resonate with the readers. This causes it to seem like and isekai, while it isn't really and isekai.In short, the lack of attention the science receives causes the background to seem somewhat careless and unplanned.However, it is a good story with good plot, despite its flaws. I've read up to pretty much the latest chapter, so I know.It's just that these problems bother me quite a bit, do I decided to leave a review.So, in case you do write a second book, please keep in mind the inner workings of one's mind. Because seriously, the way you characterized Reinst/Lyra, they really shouldn't be acting that way.

Great character development..Interesting characters..The mc has a good sense of humour 👍👌👌

Hi author I know you can do better  please try an upload more chapters I know you maybe busy bit also try to consider us readers how we will fill when for days, weeks or months without any updates how we feel please try to do something about it thank you

The story is unbelievably good. Just keep grinding

Everyone loves Evil MC as long as he is not stupid please keep update!                                                                                                                             

a little confusing and the plot is a little all over the place with mc kinda getting shit on most of the time but I do like this novel so far it's decent but there's definitely room for improvement

Oh would you look at that, you usual brain rot title, your usual horny mind cover page. What can you even expect on this site?...What's that? Wait, you mean this novel is good? Oh hell nah............is it?This novel is what I can only assume to be a continuation of OWE, the previous (incomplete) work by Mr. Stache. It follows our usual plot, you have the main character, annnnnnnnnnnd he's dead.Now's he's transmigrating? Oh wow, he's transmigrating into a nearly dead Villain in a novelesque scene. How Original!~Any moment now, we'll hit the regression button and go back to the ver--...Huh. No regression it seems. Instead, what is this, a Soap Opera? Ah... the characters are viewing the past thanks to some holy artifact, and they find out that the man that they put on death's door, the one who they thought of as the most villainous monster in history, he was in actually a soft man!? With a soft heart, that had no choice but to freeze under the assaults of the world. Wow, how sad...I can almost shed a tear...Tears for all the readers that dismiss this story as your usual webnovel bullshit. TL;DR: This novel is a gut-wrentcher that does not hold back on its punches when it slams the waterworks. Go read it, I'm not asking. Zi Long Ling Long Land Verisioness~~~Let's start with some concrete stuff before I start fan-boying. 1. Writing Quality: Top Notch. You hardly find any grammatical error, if any. Sentences? To the point, no BS mode. Obviously, it switches things up when expositions need to take center stage. To illustrate, long time webnovel readers of the modern day, the xianxia and system enthusiasts, the exposition sounds like a mirror. It's fun, humorous, and tries to give everything personality in a place where all you can find are edgelords who wish to see nothing but a similarly edgelord MC with a gazillion wives and strength that slaps people over and over again. It doesn't feel boring, but rather consistent. 8/10Update Schedule: Check the frequency of OWE's updates. You'd expect this new novel to be dead by now no? How surprising it must be, to find that the author hasn't missed a single fucking day since he first began?Let's hope he doesn't go on a long ass smoke break again.  10/10World Building: Take LoTM, but tone it down a few levels, and remove the 60 page exposition of how smooth and buttery the chicken peas are, or how juicy the pork is. Okay, maybe tone LoTM down a few more levels. Whatever it is, it's enough. The author expects you to go through the story and understand shit when needed, so he doesn't bore you with stuff. However, you can see that the world that they live in has history. Now how it develops in the future is not something I can say. For now, 6.3/10. Character Design: Take a character, introduce him/her to the main character, familiarize and build up rapport with the readers, and then kill them off. Textbook formula no?What's hard? Doing all this and executing in such a way that the death HITS.What's harder? Doing all THAT, in less than 90 chapters, TWICE, with a bunch of shit happening in the background. For those that we've gotten to properly experience, all I can say is that they are fleshed out as hell. But for the others who we haven't yet reached, they still live a lil 2D. And the crowd has personality, but not enough. For now, 6+Potential(10)/10Story Development: Twists here, twists there, plot points that make the author seem like a man with a plan (or a smartass, choose your fancysmansy), and wonderful execution to a point. Good shit. The characters act in a way that can be understood. As one 'I'm the second coming of Jesus' would say:Reasonable Development.  8.5/10 (high balling a teeny amount because of potential)..I started fanboying anyway. FUCK. Well, whatever. From what I've heard, the story won't be SS long, but more in the fields of 'it's enough.' Start reading, because no way in hell am I letting myself be the only one suffering due to cliffhangers. (binged the entire shit fortunately, and we're just now entering the new volume, so there's shit to be seen.)Overall rating: 4.6384/5. MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR--

Hello, nice to meet you, I am the author. I apologize in advance if you find any spelling mistakes. I am not very familiar with English so there may be some errorsdue to the language barrier.Once this is clear, I would appreciate it if you could share it and give it support... thank you very much and sorry for the inconvenience.

I want to read this novel..but when i check the author's other novels...sigghh😮u200d💨MOST OF THE NOVELS ARE ON HIATUS !! so this will probably end the same👏😒

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

Okay sorry guys..I will now stop uploading my works here.. why?I noticed how the system here works lol.I am the kind of person who can't upload daily to be honest, which is what wn requires for my work to be advertisedAnd that's really messed up. I don't care about income tbh, I just want my work to be viewed by many people.don't worry, i will finish uploading until volume 1 finish, and after that, i will continue uploading my works for free on my discord and fb page.for now, my fb page is not available but here's my discorditskyoko_0I look forward to meet you guys outside of wn and thanks for supporting me (0.0%)

the mc is overpowered which is what I'm here for and I like how power minded mc is.