Chaistream Eclipse

After reading a couple hundred chapters here' s my opinion..ProsInteresting ideas for a worldHis cheat is pretty cool and the things it can do a really extensiveConsEveryone but the main char is 1-d at bestKinda slow progression for such an op cheatEveryone important char is a Male,like all soldier/general even enemies are basically all male, like seriously at chapter 200 there's 4 women who have names (not counting the 2 I mention later)and none are important even a slightly to the storyExtremely over reliance on modern weapons to kill anything,like he almost has enery weapon you can think of and he uses them constantly, Handguns,rifles,grenade/rocket launchers, he even has a freaking assault helicopter and hes using them in a fantasy setting on fantasy creatures,like it would've been cool if he could improve the personal strength of others with his cheat but he couldn't play out his modern warfare fantasy that way I guess.As for why I finally stopped reading, well the main char's enemies kidnapped and killed 2 girl he knew( he just met them), so he chose to revive them with new bodies that were naked while another dude he recruited just watched (he had all the time in the world to put clothes on them before he took them to the revive alter) ,I just hate reading stories where women who are clearly becoming important to the story, just be randomly seen naked by anyone but the MC, it's one of the main reasons I read CN stories instead of JP or US ones.

I'm going to be honest, the MC starts of extremely OP, basically Chuck Norris-tier one-man army, and you can tell from the various scenarios in the first chapter. Also from the first chapter, we can use foreshadowing to predict that the author will be extremely biased towards the MC; Even MC's sisters was spared from death indicating lack of any tragedies in the future and the novel will most likely just be a Stomp-on-NPC type novel.Not sure why the author would come up with such a stupid family evaluation system. Sexist maybe but it certainly dies imply that males should marry as many wives as possible? No Emperor would implement such a retard-level caste system requiring a male heir because guess what? 50% of all births are males which means that 50% of the population are by definition aristocrats and would  be entitled land from the government, rent out, and collect taxes from their fiefdom. What about individual contribution? Would you fire your generals because their sons died in battle for the country? Wouldn't this force the sons of generals/commanders/etc to not inherit their fathers battle knowledge? If you were a commoner and have to send your sons out to battle, if you lose your son then you would basically be doomed to stay in your place in the caste system and never move up; Essentially locking your upward mobility if you were poor. We all expect future dystopias but man, we already have a dystopian-style historical empire. Huge amounts of logical fallacy.Uprising anyone?

Reading up to Ch22, it is hard to read. The situation changes are abrupt. Sometimes time would pass suddenly without indication - in one paragraph it is one date, and next, it is suddenly the future. Sometimes the PoV would change abruptly. The living conditions, his location, there is no smooth transition. I have had to re-read the passages to infer things. The relationships he has (he has only 2) are unclear. The only thing that is clear is that world is strong eat the weak and he is very weak. An example, in ch22 he has some people collected outside his house (probably). There is no clear indication if they are grouped outside his door, you can infer but it is confusing.It needs some serious editing.

I tried to get into the story but the MC is a b complaining about everything when he has a second chance at life

Just finished this and i found it very interesting, high hopes for the next chapters to come. Very interested in the little lion cub turning into what's shown in the main art of the novel.

Utter fucking trash, The Only Advice for you is don't read it, DON'T FUCKING EVEN BOTHERING TO READ IT, this is the first time i made a useless review, even trashy novels get better review from me with constructive criticism, I'm chapter 25+ expecting the main character to grow up just a tiny bit, but the progress is so fucking slow that it's killing me, HE'S RETARDED NOT CHILDISH , Since even if i search the whole universe the only way i could found one would be if they have mental disabilities.

A solid read with good written Protagonist lvling System and good flow of teh story not too hurried but also not like DBZ episodes where you have see people get beat down for 40 min too give them a good fight all in all solid fan-fic

I really like thisy and u don’t see many American football ns so please keep updating