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The characters are developing nicely and the world is also slowly changing but not to fast. Soon spelling or grammar errors but over all it’s a good read.

Amazing writing skills 👌, loving the world background and also loving the MC already.       Plot is great and story development seems to be going well too.keep up the good work dear author!

The story is great in my opinion, but I tend to like any book that satisfies my angsty blood. Truthfully, the world-building happens quite fast and sometimes it's just a bunch of info being dumped on you, but once you sort through that information, it is quite amazing. The fights tend to follow the same old cliches in which sometimes it ALMOST seems like the main character is about to lose but then he wins. I don't actually think he has legitimately and formally lost a battle yet. It follows the same trope as certain cultivation bases are revealed to the main character as he rises through the ranks, which I'm okay with.One thing that sucks is that the quality of translation takes quite a steep dive as you get further into the book. Names will often be wrong and certain names will be mistaken and misplaced. Sometimes even cultivation techniques will be mistaken as a character's name. The overall flow doesn't change much but it seems like less care is getting put into the story, which sucks. The main character is okay but he always overcomes basically all obstacles. The side characters are pretty bland and the enemies are worse. They are all one-dimensional idiots who repeatedly spout out their backing before being killed, and it stays like this throughout the entire story. One thing that annoys me is that everyone has a mind attribute that increases as they get stronger, but everyone has borderline mental disabilities and are retarded. They can't think straight and are always so f***ing prideful.The romance is almost nonexistent. There is one main girl but the mc never actually portrays where he stands and never says whether he loves her or not. I actually like it this way because I tend to not like romance in novels like this, I like them to focus solely on the mc.The story develops in the same way the cultivation bases are revealed. Once the mc gets to the peak of what he knows, more is revealed and more parts of the cosmos is shown. I actually like how they do this though.After all the bashing that I have gave this novel, I actually really enjoy it. I   started reading it to quench my thirst for battle after reading The Mech Touch and this sure can do it. So if you are looking for an overpowered protagonist and don't care much, this is a good book for you.

It's a quite good read. It's new with new thoughts and plot twists and turns.                                                                                  Signing out

He shook his head.

Ok, open inventory

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Frederick heard a soft voice respond. "Very well, you may enter."