This is a great story so far and gave 5⭐️review for your efforts and possibly more chapters🤫, also i have a skill idea for MC if you're interested.

The general plot idea of this chapter isn't too bad, though the writing quality could really use some improvements. Currently I'm waiting for the next update, and things are bound to get interesting. The development of the story is a but abrupt, and a lot of things could be tweaked to make each scene a lot more realistic, and lengthen the overall word count. The characters aren't too well introduced, and the description of the scenes lack action and impact. World backround is quite plenty though. Overall, it has potential in itself, just some extra effort.

it is peak.Didnt expected that failed writer will write a harem novel.

This story had me hooked from the first chapter! The action is intense, the world-building is solid, and the characters feel real. Chals is such a good lead, and the mix of sci-fi, rebellion, and high-stakes drama keeps you turning the pages. If you love dystopian thrillers with depth and twists, this one’s a must-read! 🔥

the novel seems to be a fun and lighthearted adventure with plenty of humor, unique characters, and a very unconventional hero. It's perfect for readers to enjoy a comedic twist on the hero's journey.

God I feel like crying. Why didn't I find this first than the other? . Well, I think I'll delete the review I made on the other version. PS: Author, it would be a good idea if in the NTR version you put in the synopsis that says that you have a version without NTR. It would have helped me a lot    :´´v. Please update often..

highly recommendedmore updates please 🥺🥺

A story of a war maiden and the sin of gluttony.....I think. I can see how much potential it has especially with a beginning like that. It's an interesting story, though grammatical errors and words structures are off on almost every chapter.  The story is interesting overall. and I recommend Grammarly app for editing

Shameless author review here!Dearest gentle readers welcome to my newest creation. I hope you hop on the ride because it's gonna be a bumpy one!In the mood for dark romance, enemies to lovers, action and thrilling moments that get you searching for more? then you're in the right place!Our ML is insane (In a dangerously handsome way) so don't expect any fluff from him just his undying obsession 👀🔪Your support will mean a lot to me! I hope you stay for the ride!

very good story.... waiting for more chapters

Hope the translator continue translating this one. There's already 3300+ available in the websites and it was so good but takes a long time to release.

tbh I'm liking it overall, was gonna read the old one but I don't see any point in doing that. Although for me personally I feel like you could make parts more descriptive.