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Quick summary how the story goes: Someone tries to attack one of the MC's girls, MC gets angry and kills his whole clan/family, it angers someone else who tries to attack MC's girls for revenge, repeatThis book's author makes it very hard to remain interested in his book. Overall I like the world he built but, he makes repeated stupid plot choices that make it hard to even keep reading. After this review I have decided to put this one hold and read something else and maybe my frustration with the authors horrible writing habits will go down enough to finish the book.Someone hitting on or trying to steal one of the MC's wives, female family members or other female friends happens about every 20-30chapters (not an exaggeration). This same plot progression is regurgitated over and over and over (x500).He writes the MC's wives into idiots. The MC tells them that he is leaving to go look for resources and he may even be gone years in the process and tells them to wait for him at the City they just spent hundreds of chapters working to build. This place was meant to be their home for their family to live in peace. So when the MC vanishes for 10 years what do the idiots do? The leave to look for the MC. Because the idiots left, after just 2 years the City they worked so hard on starts to be corrupted and slow taken over by their enemies. But, where were the MC's most trusted and powerful people who he left behind to protect the city? They went looking for the MC going through an array leading to a small world where many Hidden Sects are located.What makes this all the more stupid is that at the exact moment he returns from the Small word the group of idiots entered the array leading them in just as he went out. Oh and had the MC not returned at that exact moment the idiots would have all been killed because it was the MC returning that allowed them to survive the trip through the array.But, the stupidity continues later when the MC finally decides to go look for the idiots (his wives) and of course at just the moment he enters the array another random array pops up in the Small world and of course the idiots decide to go through to return to their Husband but, of course that would be to simple and the array ends up sending them to an even higher plane despite the fact that they supposedly already confirmed the array would lead them back home.The best part of this book is the fact that it in-cooperates Modern Tech with the Cultivation world but, the author seems to have become bored with that and has now starting writing your average Cultivation LN. Tossing out the unique aspects of the book now that you got your readers on the line is simply bad writing.After reading the spoiler below its good to see someone else felt where I was coming from.

The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6  new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.

Author here, this novel is really good! More seriously I got a lot of positive feedback so far so I hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for your support everyone!

otimo pena  porque parece que o autor abandonou o livro meu coraçao chora por isso!!!!!!!!!! Autor volte e de pelo menos um final a esse livro pois a historia e otima !!!!

monal?? you there? what happened? everything all good? Dudee reply

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Sorry guys, I will be on hold for about 3 weeks. I am on a field exercise with my unit. I will try to write as much as possible in between and come back with a mass release. So sorry for the break.

A rare find. This novel has a refreshing take on system/cultivation themes. Despite its low power ranking, it's easily in the top 10 novels this app has to offer in terms of quality and originality. For me personally it has dethroned Psychic Parasite as the number 1 novel on the app.