Hey great author Have read your book and it's really amazing but I would like to share you some tips on how to grow your book performance

It is nice for a good start, I love the character development, the tension and the way and manner of the characters, but however, I somehow wished Aliana has an evil or vengeance mind against her family, I mean that will make it more intriguing, I don't know if the writer is planning on doing that, but I feel that will make it better

I like the overall idea of the book. From the world building to the dialogues and description. Good work

Fairly good. The writing and story quality👌👌.Read up until the available chapters and looking forward to the next

The system concept is common however i still like this.

Minor grammatical errors aside, the premise is intriguing and interesting... Good always seems to win in every story, interesting how the story goes... hope the demon lord doesnt end up a hero as well, hahah will continue reading!

I enjoyed this, it's very unique , characters are fun, and it looks to have effort put into. Anyone reading this I recommend giving it a try

Decent, but has an extremely slow update.

the story is very good.....And the detailing is also nice....

I like the story so far, the characters are very likable and such. It does get pretty violent near the end (volume 2 I think), and it made me feel like crap, but otherwise it's pretty good. there are still things that haven't been clarified yet though, and I'm not sure if I have just forgotten, or the author hasn't mentioned it yet. The side stories do get somewhat annoying at times though and I fail to get attached to the characters

Don't normally write reviews, but the MC gives off weird vibes in a good way. Hope to see some actual power leveling soon, but so far it's just different enough to keep me entertained.

I can't wait to read this novel, the author seems to be a very nice person and I'm excited to read my first webnovel ever! needa make it 140 characters