LOVE? GROSS (BUT OKAY!)

this novel has no point to its existence. the beginning plot is rushed, and just outta nowhere he now has the search bar, next after the rape incident, vegetative state girlfriend and his grief and still present love for her the guy decides to take a drunk women home and have a wild night. its like he doesn't remember the rape crime he was set up for in a very similar scenario. the funny part is that its only ch.12 and tbe author already destroyed his own novels synopsis. really disappointing mc. i have no respect for the man anymore.

Really good, just wish the MC didn't let the women in his life push him around. He really needs to learn to say no. His whole family women are trashy people.

First is writing quality. The writing quality of this novel is honestly not that good. There are many grammar and spelling errors, but the novel is still readable and you can still follow the flow, it's a 3.Stability of updates is a solid 5. The author updates every 2 days about, which is good, and consistent, but could be better.The story development is really slow in the beginning, you really have to get past the first 10 chapters for the pace to finally speed up, so it really was kind of a slug reading through the first 10 chapters. It's a solid 4, because afterwards, the story really picks up and gets good.The character design is okay. To be honest, everything is really generic, there really isn't any uniqueness yet, but that's what you expect from a novel in this genre. So a solid 4, as there are ways to make it unique, but that you just didn't do.Finally is the world background, the best part. There are many unique ideas in the world background, even though the frame was a little cliche. I was really surprised by the uniqueness some of the details brought, different from the generic feeling that the other parts of the story have. Definitely a well thought out world.Overall, a pretty average novel. If the chapters were edited or given a proofread, so that the writing quality was better, and the story development was a little faster, one that hooked the reader in, I would have definitely put this book on my recommended list.It's a good book author, with a good idea and a lot of potential. Continue your hard work!

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Read 7 chapters. For someone who dies because of wishing to see his sister, she hadn't been mentioned once in his thoughts. Quote: "He usually would not go this route because it led through an enemy gang's turf but his desire to see his sister clouded his judgement. ""He knew it was wrong but it was the only way he could keep his family fed and it offered a semblance of protection in their violence filled neighborhood."It would seem that the MC turned into "What past? I have no past." This basically made the beginning pointless. The novel might as well have started with the demons right away. Because the cornerstones of what made MC at the beginning, him valuing family and bearing responsibility, are jettisoned right after, turning him into an empty state character who, as he quips after the fact he is leveling his following skill.Quote: "Azemo kept leveling his only skill as he silently followed Zaebos, he would probably be a max level follower in no time."Also, quote: "We summoned you eight to become generals in the war against humanity. "After hearing the demon say, that MC will have to kill his mom and sister since they are humans, his next shown thought is... Quote: "'This room is really cozy.' "Yeah, zero reaction. MC is an empty puppet. Which makes demons in return hollow shells.  Demons against Humans are morality war between good and evil. There can't be good or evil if the MC is an empty shell of a character who simply reacts after hearing all this. "'This room is really cozy.' ".......Well, at least the grammar here is fine and well written in places. The sentences flow smoothly. Which actually just dragged me down more. Empty shell MC is usually found in authors with poor grammar and jumpy sentences that are smooth as sandpaper.In the end I feel disappointed.

Clearing my mind from all the random thoughts, I calmly stood up from my Chair while saying, [So you either want to change route completely or rather continue as we always have?.]

"Grace Hooves, you can also call me ace" the satyr girl spoke.

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