Cry , Even better if you , beg

I am a fan if cultivation and gaming system novels and i have a pretty easy going judgement i never gave a novel les than 2 stars in 2years of reading but this one is a huge disgrace in all ways there is no character build except for the MC the comedy is so poor all the action is sooo poor the story is **** I thought first that it have a lot of potential but all went to the drain this novel i sooooo bad  for any type of readers and I recommend getting as far as possible from it The translation is not bad sorry for the score but I couldn’t go with it sorry my friend and u did a great work

Writing Quality: Translate (3)Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3)Plot Development: Yes...just no (1)Character Design: China (2)Prehistory of the World: Cultivation (1)Verdict: A piece of cultivator's nonsense. I do not advise.

concept is interesting the characters are well fleshed out. the world background is well made, there are no obvious grammatical errors, it is an interesting plot and the story is quite catchy.

Revieved at ch10 which had a good character defining moment worth judging.Grammar and structure quality is good enough that it never broke immersion by itself.My main gripe and the main reason for dropping it is the MC. His motivations are solid until they suddenly arent. His father died on the frontlines and left the family poor, so poor in fact that sometimes they wake up suffocating coz they cannot afford enough air. So, ofc the MC wants to not be like him or do the same thing to his family right? Well, thats what we are told but in the defining moment he decides to be heroic and basically does the same as his father. So much for working hard and living long to help his family. But ofc he is the MC so he doesnt actually die but gets saved miraculously.  He even gets *rewarded* with a rare item coz he resembles his father while being heroic (a heroic deed which, if he was not the MC, would leave his family of 6 one more member down and ruin all hopes of rising out of their miserable poor life). No regrets and good loot for him, i guess. Furthermore the MC somehow felt like he shows more reaction to his precious gear (mom's life savings) being covered in rotten stuff compared to when that gear was robbed from him(right before a life or death battle, mind you). He didnt even mention the robbery to the ONE justice upholding friendy-ish high level guy he comes across who decides to take him under protection. The cartoonishly evil bully returned the gear (fully intact) after the death battles were over, having only covered them in rotten food. Baffling sequence of events.I couldnt root for this kind of MC or even his opponents.Well, read it you are able to get past that kinda stuff.

Though it should be a sad and touching scene, Haeji felt like vomiting. It's too cheesy for her to handle and the thought of Haeun's baby dying was something they should be happy about.

I:

"Lord Vishnu is one of the three most Supreme Deities of "Brahman

And I was headed to the class that I would share with her yet again. I had my hand on the door handle, I took a breath and quickly entered the class that was on the other side of the door.