Here is another update!Here is the first OFFICIAL look at REN!The website wont let me upload a pic bigger than 3mb so here is the lower quality JPEG of REN's character designThanks for your continued support everyone! I cant wait to drop more chapters

a very unique novel to say the least, but albeit very very good. i really do recommend this to anyone who needs a good read, the writing is fantastic.

The story began in a very interesting manner. The writing style is superb, descriptive but not boring. While you read you can envision the scenes very clearly. That's a big plus for me. Also, the setting is very mysterious, which adds another charm to the story. The author mentioned this will be a long time project. I'm happy for that, so I wish them the best of luck! Keep up the good work!🥰

I don't speak English, so forgive me for any mistakes. Honestly, so far I have nothing to complain about.He introduced a cast of 5 characters to be the main cast, which is a good number and also seems to have a good space to explore all of themThe main character is good enough and has potential to be explored, cool action scenes and plots, but for now it's hard to judge very accuratelyBut there are only 2 flaws that bothered me, 1 relatively silly and the other a little more seriousLet's start with the silliest one, be careful with the amount of unique terms you put in the work, remember that this is a novel, not a manga or anime, so there is no imageIf you put an absurd amount of terms like you are doing, there will come a time when, if someone simply stops reading for 1 or 2 months and comes back, they will be completely lost in the work, especially in the attacks.Most of the terms in the works are very intuitive and used in key moments of the work, with chidori and RasenganYou invest a lot in a short time, just be a little careful.Now the most serious thing is about the world building, the dystopian setting is intriguing, I liked how you structured it, but you exaggerated, the examiner scene was really badAre you telling me that this whole society is so dystopian, but all the cadets outside of Mikhail's squad are simply innocent at that level?Also, the fact that the Dominiques are totally disdainful even makes sense considering the idea of ​​them being on an absolute throne but the others don't make sense, they are soldiers who have gone through everything the others have gone through so their tone at that moment should have been something more complex, something like wanting to pass on a lesson to the next generation or a hatred remembering their past self. Anyway, I had other ideas but absolute disdain with touches of disgust doesn't make sense.I could have done that, but instead of Mikhail reinforcing these actions, there should have been a veiled criticism of him, showing how, although the boy was right about the supervisors being incompetent and incapable of protecting the academy against students who fought for their lives, they are like absolute authorities that cannot be challenged, which would give a new air of refreshing authoritarianism.Besides the functioning of this society, it is not at all functional, but I can ignore that since it is a dystopia, but even within a dystopia there is a very well-established social logic, with powers ensuring that it works, but for now it is forced.But apart from these 2 points the rest is sensational, I hope it continues with enormous potential, congratulations for that

The best thing I have ever laid my eyes on(Ps he wrote me very accurately)

Overlord, but not as cheesy. This story has immense potential.

Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍

It’s very good but after 155 I don’t see any 18+ anymore. Did author forget to write 18 at a couple chapters or is there just non after chapter 155?

Wow! It is a very refreshing story so far! At first I was thinking it was going to be like those stay at home survival against the disasters type, but as I continued, it was different from most of the others I've read so far! I look forward to the rest and wish you luck on this journey of creation.

I love it, the plot is so classic and well established ❤️u200d🔥❤️u200d🔥❤️u200d🔥❤️u200d🔥 keep at it, zik is a well balance main characters. Can't wait for the next chapter

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍