Beyond Repair - When Grief doesn't die!

HONESTLY WOW. not a lot of times you get adaptations from African culture and mythology in this platform especially, curiosity lead me into opening the book, and the tools irl have been beautifully utilised by Sam, wish this were a book, pretty darn different concept, but you gotta read it carefully and find time because THE DETAILS MATTER the author hints it (or maybe I'm trynna analyse too implicit details lol)

there's just way too much infodump,there's whole chapters of him just thinking out his thoughts.

Well, at least I won't have to worry about nonsensical hook up with women with sudden inexplicable obsession with the MC. One thing I have to comment is that the author dragged in several real life people in the novel. This is not a fan fiction but a novel that's expected to be published (at least online), has the author asked for permission?

The story is actually kind of enjoyable, great quality and stable updates. The thing that really drags down the story is the author. He's a Chinese supremacist. I know a little can be fine and it can be funny at times but it's taken a too far in this novel. So readers beware, it's a nice novel but wow the racism becomes the plot line almost. Instead of fighting the common enemy he just wails on none han races. Oof.

Basecly, the enviroment in this VRMMO is well made, we know that there is a world with mortal in a culture based on Vikings, and we know for sure that there is a lot of villages and possibly living in different biomes. That, for me, was a interesting idea, because the protagonist in playing a game where he is a god and have to make people follow his religion, praising and praying for him, because he get stronger as he gain more followers. But, the problem is that the author does not focus on this side of the story, the interesting one, he atcually focus on the RPG part of the game with all of the generic things we see in EVERY VRMMO novel, it's kinda desapointing see the author spending more effort in the generic part than in the interesting one where he can work with the mortal's personalitty, culture, world building, other religions, villages, hierarchy in the villages or even in his own religion. When the protagonist leaves the mortal world and go do his RPG stuff (Grinding, Pk, basicly killing people (When one of the most generic little villains like young masters and people with idiotic reason for try PK someone... dude, they still on beta, why someone would possibly try PK other players to get their itens and get stronger when they're gonna lose everything when the game is released?) and monsters, or searching treasures, but i don't know about that part for sure since i didn't even half of the story. I won't stop reading because i am hopeful that the author will make the MC explore further in the mortal world rather than make him interact with a lot of plain and generic characters with 0 importance for the story or the game itself. I think that grinding all the time is stupid since is just a beta, yeah, you will gain more experience fighting the monsters, but wans't the MC a professional player in this kinda of game? Would make more sense see him exploring the world as much as he can so he can find hiding NPC's, treasures, and places and to spread his religion, or even stablish a conexion with the important NPC's from big villages and stuff.

Bruh all that for fried Chicken I approve and hopIng for a 2nd Book!!!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Good story, MC is OP but lacks knowledge and decision making, doesnt always thinks steps ahead before doing something. Also what is the purpose of those 100 death knight is his not ever gonna use it?

overall the quality is genuine and this mf wrote 18 chapters in a month.. the plot quite eye catching, I'm amazed by the story line it seems like a reality fiction thanks for sharing such a vibrant story