I look forward to reading this story and hope it will be as interesting as I preview it to be

Alright, raw thoughts—no neat sections, just how it hit me as I read.The opening? Heavy. It immediately sets this grim, almost suffocating tone. Wang Zhu feels like someone who’s just waiting for the inevitable, like she’s already halfway gone, and Azi Fe is the only thing tethering her to existence. That contrast between them is what grabbed me. One’s resigned, the other refuses to let go. That’s compelling.The writing has this poetic, almost lyrical flow, which fits the mood, but sometimes it feels too polished, like real people don’t talk like this. Azi Fe especially—his words are intense, but they feel scripted at times, like he’s trying too hard to be profound. Maybe that’s intentional, maybe that’s just who he is, but it stood out.The weight of it all—Wang Zhu’s apathy, Azi Fe’s desperation—comes through strong, but I kept wondering: why is she like this? I get that she’s dying, that she’s accepted it, but I want to feel it more, not just be told. A small flashback, a moment of vulnerability—something to make her pain more hers rather than just a concept. Azi Fe, on the other hand, is fire. You feel his frustration, his refusal to let her fade, but I also wonder: is he fighting for her, or just because he doesn’t want to be alone? That would be an interesting layer.One worry: if the whole story keeps this level of intensity, it might get exhausting. Darkness hits harder when there are moments of contrast—whether that’s a memory of something beautiful or just a break in the tension. Right now, it feels like drowning with no chance to come up for air.But yeah, there’s something here. It has that tragic, doomed feel, like you know this won’t end well, but you still want to see how it plays out. I’d keep reading, just to see if Azi Fe can actually pull her back—or if he’s just delaying the inevitable.

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This novel pulls you in right away with its rich world and fast-paced, intriguing start. The writing flows beautifully, and the mix of action and suspense kept me hooked. The world building is detailed yet easy to follow, though a bit more explanation of the magical terms would help. Even in just the prologue, the characters feel alive, and I’m already curious about what’s next. If you love epic fantasy with mystery and heart, this is a must-read!

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Shameless author review:Just in case you’re not sure if this is the book for you, here are a few more details:1. This is primarily a romance, but there’s also lots of worldbuilding and fantastical things happening.2. This book is not a harem, and there is no love triangle.3. This is a slow burn (emphasys on slow) where the MCs get to know each other first before the romance starts. 4. There will (eventually) be a bit of smut, but nothing too crazy. 5. The main MC, Perry, does make a lot of questionable choices in the beginning of the story, and it takes him a while to understand everything. But that doesn’t mean he’s a pushover and lets people walk all over him. He’s good at improvising and figuring things out as he goes.6. Even though there is lots of worldbuilding, the main driving force of this story are the characters and how the challenges they face change them - and how that then changes the world. 7. Expect this story to be long (minimum of 500 chapters) because I have big plans for my beloved characters. 8. Oh, and it’s gay. Very, very gay. That being said, I hope you give my chaotic lovelies a chance and enjoy reading their story! 🤪

SHAMELESS  AUTHOR. Pls give it a try. it might be your taste. Then please give me feedback

Other than clear marking of non protagonist pov missing, it is very well written.

I have been waiting to read this here! 💖💖

interesting novel.. look foward to read it

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Me gusta mucho esta historia es interesante 👍