Joel Lyons Chronicles

Really interesting, I love this story. And really recommend. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Keep spirit for Author. 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

The chapters are split up. Chapter 40(1) on webnovel is actually chapter 19 MTL/RAW. The site smuggled in a new business opportunity - splitting the chapters. In this case, they gave us less than 19 full chapters. Used to be 60.. 40.. What a magic! Of deception.The first chapters.. are unpolished by the author in my opinion. But if it improves later on then it's fine. There's some bland, stiff dialogue, unnatural behaviour, forced plot. The high rating's reason? Author's name does the job, for example. Besides, there's potential, just that the execution so far is average.The MC got [Agility] talent, then after using it he calls himself talented while being serious. Ha ha ha.. :DIt's one of these novels where the one that takes MC role is decided by system (or well, apparently it's his Super ability). The author doesn't bother to write about the process of e.g. overcoming a language barrier. Just use system and... done, problem solved. For convenience...Grown men shown so far have somewhat flawed, unsuitable mentality for the roles they play (apparently they are experienced hunters but I wonder how they grew up and how they survived till now in such a dangerous world). The MC himself is alright, a bit dumb, a sheltered flower, no survival skills, so whatever logic or reasoning he comes up with is fine:) Hopefully he'll grow up as his adventures continue, or else be prepared for masterminds to have less IQ than he does.The author chose to write a novel with system and copied a popular idea. What was his motivation for this, one could wonder. In the same batch of trials, the author of "Protect our Patriarch(Chief)" actually roasted this kind of system novels.My comment is based only on the 19 (split into 40) chapters translated right now, because I have not touched MTL. If I read more chapters in future I'll either re-write my comment or add a fresh one with proper rating. 19 is not much after all and the subsequent might have a higher quality, I don't know. There are novels like World's Best Martial Artist, Museum of Deadly Beasts, A Sorcerer's Journey, Black Iron's Glory and many more that had even more boring, or cliche, or flawed initial chapters yet turned out to be much much better as I continued to read. It might also be the case with Astral Apostle.

A non-berserk berserker!? how incredibly rare! It's a pretty interesting story so far which is saying something because I'm not really into gaming novels. My only complaint is that we don't have games like this in real life.

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Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................

/CONTINUATION UPDATE: 18-11-2024/Hi everyone, author here!After completing a few projects of mine and getting back into the groove of things, I can finally say that I'm taking back on this huge project! As some of you may know, it's no secret that writing over 130 000 words on a story can be particularly taxing, especially with a regular schedule and another job.But after letting time do its thing, I've regained what I felt I'd lost, which is passion. It's the reason why I left it alone for so long. I'd rather let it sit and stew than ruin the story and lose those invested in it.But what's in store now? Well, I've not been idling doing nothing. I've written other stories, matured and, more importantly, been acquiring a better, and frankly cleaner, writing style. This means I'm currently going over every chapter (re-writing some and fixing story plots in others), meaning you can expect a muuuuuuuch better version of the novel you already loved.This process should last about 15-20 days (Man, I was writing a lot), but don't expect new chapters to drop when it's done. One thing I learned is that it's better to accumulate a bank, which will be 15 chapters long. This'll ensure that no long hiatus happen again.And that's all I had to say today! Thanks to everyone who stuck around, and I hope to see you back in the comments :)

Except for writing qualities, everything is good in this book. Author, you should correct all those typos in chapters. ......................

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