writing quality is perfect the novel flows naturally while giving out who are the characters involved and the world background is also perfect

I will read more chapters first, but from the prologue it is quite interesting according to the genre that I like. I look forward to the next chapter 😊

absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author🔥can't wait to see how this all unfolds

loving the plot twist 🙂. I think with more encouragement, she'll make a good author 👍👍

I'm gonna  review it five stars, that's all.

I believe this one has a lot potential.Hope to see more.Continue on,Author!

Well look good. Have not seen much world building yet in novel. Update daily I like reading non human litrpg novel. So continue writing the novel.

i hope that in the webtoon will have an another chapter I really want to read it there also😓😓

loved this book so much i have to keep up with the updates. consider mass release please please 🙏

“I’m beyond excited to finally share my debut story” don’t be, lmao. It’s trash

its like ai generated story and i think it has to be more improved. but its not  that bad id give it a solid 5/10, it looks like the author is new so im not complaining that much

the twist with the "system" is a cool idea and the writing is good, the pacing is good except the 3 first chapters. so far i recommend trying it (ch13)