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Author review!In this book, you can expect a lot of action with a focus on worldbuilding, getting to learn about the world of Gaia along with the system wielded by Gael.

This story has a great premise unlike any I’ve seen before. I’m interested to see how Maiden’s journey unfolds.

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I'm gonna drop my honest opinion I don't read system stories but this actually caught me unaware. I love how we get to see Rhett's journey to becoming strongit's highly recommended

It started great but turned into absolute garbage, storywise. I do hope other works from the same author is better since they do have amazing potential.

Nice book..Has a lot of potential. Upload more chapters

Hooked on this webnovel! Reading a few chapters every day is my new routine. The mc's character development is awesome. Loving the story so far! Thanks for the translations!

Overall, I like it. It did take a lot of chapters to really get a feel for what exactly was going on. It definitely takes at least a passing understanding of Chinese culture, specifically filial piety, to get through the early stuff. Also kowtowing, punching down, face-slapping and such.The background mysteries are pretty interesting. You genuinely want things to work out for the lead - and her slow warming wife - even if Meixiu's methods of going about things stay on a continuously confusing line of "I'm keeping my secrets for reasons, just believe they are good ones".

nice story love the plot.i recommend reading

Very interesting story, I thought the synopsis/blurb could've been crafted better. The story overall was very good, I haven't read a lot of sword wielder stories so when I read this it was really interesting and to the point. Although the pace was a little fast, I think for someone reading webnovel it will catch their attention quickly. The paragraphs are not spaced well enough in my opinion, some are too long and they strained my eyes. Perhaps you can look into that in future chapters.  Speaking of which, the paywall was a little too quick. I wouldn't recommend paywalling it that much unless you plan to write less than a hundred chapters. The writing was good, but sometimes the narrative slipped, like switching from the third-person perspective to the writer's/narrator's. There were no grammar or punctuation mistakes so far, but the use of passive voice was overrated, it got annoying to keep reading them. Perhaps balance them, but otherwise. I can't comment on the worldbuilding yet, but so far, so good. Avoid the info-dumping though, it won't help with a smooth narrative. The characters, Keven and Greg maybe, they sound and feel 2d, not real human. But maybe that was the author's intention to develop them further. the updates seem to be frequent and the development of the story is good enough, so I would say this deserves a 4/5 stars. Kudos to the author and happy reading!