It ok for now but I spect more in future

Nothing hurts more than betrayal, I can't wait for the revenge because zero deserves so much better! ☺️good work author.

Great writing style and overall a great novel, I like how the characters interact with each other , its really good, their personalities have been fleshed out properly.

Stopping at chapter 5 because I need to stock the updates. I want to binge read this next month or something. Adios everyone, have fun reading the peak ^^)/ I'll be back soon.u200e

there are many interesting things in future stories so don't drop it because of the current chapter

i love what i saw , I can't wait to see the end

I am excited to see the new chapter, I love the flaw of the story especially every of the character has a perspective characteristics and sometimes we can feel unhappy but there is a time we can heal

honestly really impressed. I read your other novel- the fairy and the wolf one, and ended up dropping it after 370 chaps. Despite having read the other novel however I honestly can't believe this was made by the same person. It's only 14 chaps yet it has a near perfect start. It introduces us to the interesting main characters, teases us with their complex personalities, and then drops us into some good old-fashioned combat, that gives us some glimpses at what we can expect from the future brawls. I AM HOOKEDonly thing I'm worried about is the harem aspect, I like harem... BUT not when everyone is in the harem. like it's fine for MC to like see, but when ever female character is there to either have, fantasize, or become a slave to sex, then it devalues the whole story.there's already the mom, sister, wolf, guard, and its only 14 chapters. sure those are just the ones he "loves" but let's be serious for a moment, it's not lookin so good. I hope this book does better on this front then the wolf one

I tried but I couldn't go over the 11th chapter, it has the feeling of either a voice writer  someone whose first language is not English, someone trying to write too many words everyday, or some mix of the previous.There's multiple Grammar errors in every chapter, the writing style is seems geared towards teens, with a very strange flow most of the time. it may be MTL.iIhave given three stars to story development because I haven't read enough to evaluate that dimension, but the characters design reminds me of those old Asian movies that every character is some kind of extreme, very obvious and clean cut archetype.It's not like the novel is sooo bad, I've found worse here, but i find it lackluster and not worth my time

Double chapter? Double chapter!Double chapter? Double chapter!

I recommend this book. in each chapter it is important to read, the characters, Genta and Hataki are intriguing as to what their role will be. good job sensei, I will read more.

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level