The River Of Time

In my opinion, this is one of the best novels I wrote until now. I cannot vouch that everyone will like it but I'm pretty sure that the majority of readers will learn to love this books, the characters and the authors(definitely no bragging)If questions occur, you can find a discord link in my profile. Join my discord server and ask me directly. :D

After Reading Top Tier Providence, I found this story quite trashy. I mean ya'know what I mean, and I don't know what was the first created cause I'm not qidian peeps.

F*** with story development, full of crap, only 1-2 sentences worth reading out of 1 chapter, yeah full of filler for at least 100 last chapter..

[note to self]Dropped. Cuz Grammar and writing quality was a let down. The premise is good, but it could have been executed better. Did not like the narration either.

Really like story especially love plot and wish you success. Currently, the only problem is mistakes in sentences, such as using the same word twice when it is enough to do it once(like - You do you.).

Well.... it still follows the typical beasttaming setup/transmigration plot.. nothing original there. But if you're a fan of Pokemon... it is still a genre for you.Onr minus for me on this one is the lack of description of the beast... the naming sense of the author does not help either in helping the reader to visualize the beast.

A very interesting story so far but I do think you need to slow down a little you are jumping around  and it get confusing. I do love a good werewolf story so please slow down.

She waited for three days but her parents are nowhere to be seen. The girl started sobbing because she feels hungry. She has not been eating anything for three days after all. She started to begging in the street.