it's very good and the gore scene are good but there are still room for improvement ✊️

Listen, I don’t know what kind of divine enlightenment the author achieved before writing this book, but I’m convinced he ascended to a higher plane of existence, met the gods, slapped them in the face, and came back to bless us mortals with peak fiction.From the moment I started reading, I felt my IQ skyrocketing. My third eye opened. My spine straightened. My posture went from goblin mode to Greek statue in seconds. The prose? Crisp. The world-building? Immaculate. The plot twists? Had me gasping like a fish out of water. Every chapter ended with me gripping my phone like it owed me money, whispering, “Just one more…” until the sun came up.And don’t even get me started on the main character. Kyoji is HIM. The GOAT. The blueprint. This man walks into a room, and reality itself holds its breath. His abilities? Busted. His personality? Flawless. His plans? So far ahead that even the author is just along for the ride. I’m convinced Kyoji doesn’t even need to fight—he could just stand there, and the enemies would be like, “Yeah, nah, I’m good” before disintegrating out of pure respect.The action scenes? Cinematic. Every battle had me reenacting moves in my living room like I was in a martial arts training montage. The tension? So thick you could cut it with one of Kyoji’s blood blades. Honestly, this book ruined me. How am I supposed to go back to reading normal stories after experiencing this masterpiece? Everything else feels like caveman scribbles compared to this magnum opus. I need the sequel. I need the spin-offs. I need the author to be legally required to write ten chapters a day.Final verdict: 11/10. If you haven’t read this yet, what are you even doing with your life?

superzzz excited with the sory and its was good i didnt expect that lowkey dk why i only discovered this today. the updates is slower than expected i hope it updates quickly like author plzz

You already won me over by mentioning Sparta.   .....................m  & _ 6 &;?(-)(-!;&(+!(!&(8!;+)?9!'(8?)/;8/;7:()9!:7!6) /!&6!-&!7!8&!u

Loved the new chapter's, the summary and to do list finally getting a bit different, do you actually have exams tmr which is why you left that in😂?    Yeah still enjoying the story, the 4th one kinda even got my heart racing. But i wonder is mira and the other one(sorry im bad at remembering names) the only ones alive? Or they are the only ones showing it? with what ch-5 told us it seems all of them are alive... But trying there best to act... Or maybe they are not free yet, from the code maybe? Maybe im just looking too deep into it...Anyways good work ch-5 felt a bit rushed but still added alot,like more characters might be alive, was the rush cuz of you exams?Well anyways thanks for such great content really appriciate it.

Just a another author here. so this is my very first novel and as a newbie this story has many flaws like the first few chapters are rushed so i hope you will like it.. thanks for reading

Love it!!! very interesting 🌹🌹🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗💕💕💐💐💐💐💐💐

this story has great dept and i feel like it can go places, regards to the writer

A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work—though there is still room for improvement

Honestly, when I skimmed through the first six chapters, I felt like you’ve got some really nice touches, especially in the fight scenes. The way you described the dragon battle was exciting—it made me feel the tension and movement, especially when Rahit was facing the dragon head-on, and that moment when he noticed the mark on its face and the sadness in its eyes. It gave the whole scene a strange, deeper feeling.  But honestly, I felt the dialogue could be a bit smoother. Like when Ash said, "Go on without me," it felt a bit cliché. You might want to add lines that feel more natural or reflect his personality better. And there were a few moments where the sequence of events felt slightly off, but that’s totally normal in early drafts.  As for the world-building, I think it needs a bit more detail. What's the deal with the Kings’ Powers? Why are the dragons attacking? I got the sense that there's a big mystery behind everything, but there aren’t many clues yet. If you start adding subtle hints about the world's history or why the dragons are appearing, it’ll keep readers more hooked.  Overall, the story definitely has strong potential, especially with your action scenes and the small details you include. Rahit feels relatable, especially when he hesitated to kill the dragon. And that moment when the arrow pierced the dragon? Honestly, it was an unexpected, brilliant twist. I felt like you planted a seed for a mystery that’ll unfold later.  So, I think you're on a good path—you just need to smooth out the dialogue a bit and add more world-building details. And trust me, you've got something special here. 💯

im loving the book so far, keep up the good work.i will be reading it till its completed hopefully

HONESTLY LOVE THE CONCEPT OF THISL. I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR A BL ROYAL ROMANCE THAT'S ACTUALLY VERY WELL-WRITTEN AND NOT CRINGE-Y (LETS ADMIT IT. A LOT OF BL NOVELS HERE ARE SOMETIMES KINDA CRINGE-Y) IM HOPING FOR MORE ROMANCE SCENES SOOONNNN