Nexara (ENG)

still no romance?  ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

could not get past the translation. "there were factories not used by factories, gyms used as currency" was too much for me to handle. Even cursory editing done by a middle schooler would have been enough to fix the incorrect pronouns, calling a bike a donkey, and other random incomprehensible sentences.

a story ruined by the author who thinks treating his audience like idiots would make for a good story. Add to that a main character who despite being an adult has the mind of a 13 yr old boy with too many hormones raging through his system. Evey good looking girl has to be slobbered over in his mind, it is really disgusting and no wonder that women are completely fed up with guys who say these things out loud. Not all readers are male and not all readers enjoy the lewd thoughts of a guy who is supposed to have outgrown those thoughts long before he even transmigrated.The writing quality is horrible too because too often the author wants to explain how the world works through conversations that the main character has. The problem with this is that inevitably the questions are about subjects where the answer is fairly obvious as a result most of what is discussed just make the main character look dumb, look like someone who doesn't have the ability to make inferences from publicly available knowledge but most of all it make the reader look dumb because the author assumes that these are the questions that the reader wants answered, this is the knowledge the reader needs to know while the majority of it the reader already knows just from the author writing about the world. It is much better to let a narrator explain how it works and cover the mc's lack of knowledge with a simple 'he asked several questions' line that is than followed by the narrator explaining / stating how it works.

Writing Quality - 3/5, mainly because they're aren't a lot of mistakes, their are also times where several mistakes in a row have happened. I know English isn't the author's first language, but still, they're thereStability of Updates - 4/5, mainly because there have been plenty of updates since the last time I started this series, (which it only had around 20ish chapters)Story Development - 2/5, mainly because while there are places where the story can develop, their isn't a main plot in the story, just the ever-increasing strength of ArkCharacter Design - While Ark at the beginning was pretty shaky as a good MC, now (on chapter 117) he has had time to develop, and a large growth in his development has happened.World Background - While we are introduced to new places and are told about certain places, it's really hard to keep track of all of them, as well as we don't see how these different places interact with each otherPoints to work on  - Showing more changes in characters     * Mainly saying, each character has a set mindset they have, and throughout the story, while Ark did have one change near the beginning of the story, that was the only change we've had throughout the entire book - Polishing up Grammar     * There are times where problems in writing come up, rather it's a incorrect spelling, an extra letter or lack of letter, maybe take some more time to really read over the chapter to iron out the few mistakes. It'll take time, but having better quality can change a book from good, to great - Get a Main Storyline     * Like I said earlier, the story only has the development of Ark, and other characters, and that's mainly it. While that may be what you want to write about, Character development is a means to an end, not the end itself. You need to have certain goals that Ark should have, or maybe even he doesn't know it yet, but the readers should at least know where the story is heading and what goal Ark should have. If the end goal is making Ark incredibly strong, almost godlike, then we should have goals that are the stepping stones to that end goal.  - Give more realistic scenes, both from characters and also the background as well     * What I mean is for things to be more realistic than it is now. An example is near the beginning of the story, Ark woke up as an Ice wolf in a cave. As a Wolf, Ark should've seen the world differently as to when he was a human from before. Wolfs have different strengths of senses than humans do, so Ark should've been using his sense of smell for the majority of his beginning time, but instead he only used hearing and sight. His thought process also didn't really change much from his time as a human. As the saying goes, the body reflects the mind, so his thought process should've at least change a little to be a little more wolf-like, maybe more fierce and law of the jungle like, which later it did, but for that first arc in the forest, I didn't see any major changes in thought process. Overall - This series has a very shaky beginning, around 20 chapters into it it starts to get pretty good due to the development of the MC as well as just being with him on his journey. Their are points that could be worked on, mainly having more unique characters or also having drastic changes in characters due to certain actions done to them, like how when Ark was captured and tortured for 5 weeks, we at least saw some difference, but what I'm saying with a more drastic change would be how he see's the world, and how he thinks, because that didn't change, only how he reacts to things has, which to the readers doesn't show as much as thoughts do.

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I really like the story but I wish they will hurry up and update it it's been out for a while and it hasn't been updated since chapter 40 I don't know how much longer it's going to be till they updated I hope it's going to be soon

The synopsis is something that a 7th grader would come up with. "In turn this led to" my ass. Seriously, the sypnosis is incredibly vague and lacking in substance. Frankly put, it is quite appalling for it's lack of charisma and word choice. If the translation or base material is at this level, then I don't hold much hope for this novel at all.

I loved the way of writing and the actions in this novel and I am looking forward to the rest of the chapters to upload to read it, it is really interesting and it deserves 5 stars