This has potential of becoming population it's masterpiece 👍

Your book is admirable, keep on the good work 😀

The story starts with a simple premise - mass awakening of monsters throughout the world, and MC is a sort of 'chosen one' with a daughter in tow. So far there's less focus on magic and skills than other stories but the system elements are abundantly present in each chapter, serving as a continuous reminder of MC's growth. It's too early (review is as of ch10) to comment much on the character development, but there are a few established characters and MC's relationship with his daughter remains criticial to the plot. I'm interested to see where this goes!Definitely give it a shot if you're a fan of robust system novels.

i think it's one of the Bast love story i read because I don't read love story novels but I liked it 😁

Great Novel. Interesting story lines. Can’t wait to read more.

Story is really good, but the author is definitely new to writing, as they say themself in like every little "author's comments" thing. The writing was a bit more clunky towards the beginning, but it's definitely gotten a little better later on.

The author has a little way to go and some editing to do, but there's so much potential here! I believe the author is going to be giving us something pretty fun, unique, and interesting with this novel. Keep it up!

The book was totally amazing. I didn't expect a first chapter to have a strong impact on us readers. the author did a very good job writing this.Its a very good and recommended novel to everyone whether it is writing quality or the plot structuring. everything is so good.

Although I haven't read much of this novel so far I was quite impressed with authors writing style. Their words paint the scenes very beautifully almost like poetry in a way. I will keep reading.

only first 3 chapters but the story is built very well in every aspect

okay real review...................the story is good so far, the only problem i have is that we don't get to see the mc make use of his talent except for 2 chapters(maybe it'll change in the future) but it's good so far

Very nice......................