I like the dynamics of the first chapter it’s a nice start just I feeling the prose and writing seems a bit bland and lack’s imagery. To should have on the pride to feel natural in the story and he will be good

No harem, no harem plz no harem. It ruins the story and will make yours ordinary as many others on this site. I hope you don't drop and don't fk this story up with harem.

I'm hooked🫢This story has sucked me in, and I'm craving more. The writing is incredible, and I'm invested in the characters. Please keep going .I need to know what happens next😄

Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

Guys currently my exams are going on so i ki8nda can’t focus but i will be taking your suggestions

How could I not be interested in reading this? I really like one thing that stands out the most about this book, and yes, that is the cover of this book, my gosh, it is really great. And I was fascinated by the way you presented the city of the future, it was really moving, even though it was a bit lacking in detail, maybe I can give you some suggestions, which are definitely there. There is definitely a plot or some that goes too far back, actually this is not a problem, it makes it more interesting, but because this is brought up continuously, it actually seems confusing. But this is just my suggestion, if you feel comfortable with it, go ahead. Keep fighting my author!!!!

This is a very unexpected but very good novel recommend

No ntr = win                                                                                                                                             

Good world building, loving the action so far and the OP is very well written! Great vibes so far!

Is this novel already done? or already dropped?

Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

I only planned to spend 15 minutes here, but I stayed for the story.The writing quality is top notch. The romance has a nice pace.The main character is funny. The author always deliver when it comes to describing the monster. Unfortunately, the Multieye Dire is no longer in the story, but his introduction was nerve-wracking trust me. Also bullying... I mean, interacting with the author is always fun.The only two things I have to complain about are 1) The choice of setting, the first two weren't bad. There are no Arcadamy stories without Arcadamy and the forest with beach is perfectly sufficient to introduce new characters. However, in pre-editing the MC was thrown into a "standard  isekay small town" setting. In post-editing, the MC was in a catacomb-like place, which is more interesting. I would have liked a little more interaction with the environment, like the true darkness or the maby safe place above the tree. It's just weird that they didn't even look up there even though they could teleport.2) Gram