Stories To Tell in the Dark

great book

The start was good, but as the story progress it became quite repetitive. The nationalism are specially strong in this one calling others country a thief but not knowing their country is also a thief.

This feels like a meh version of “I get stronger the more I eat”. Definitely not as gruesome as IGSTMIE, but also not as intriguing. It lacks the pull. It seems very cookie cutter without anything to spice it up.

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Story Development 0/5*SPOILERS*. MC playing a game to get money cause he eats a lot and his wife needs a second job to feed his lazy ass. Character Design 0/5Author can't utilize his characters, keeps making empty characters that have no purpose. All antagonist characters are the casual trash talking for no reason character that you see in every bad novel.Idiot genius and overly powerful MC who trains his martial arts (he is already at the top there is no training in this novel). If he wasn't constantly saying that he is a martial artist we wouldn't be able to see it for ourselves, he can't remain calm and he always fight to short his troubles.World Building 0/5Too many inconsistencies. Author states on thing and he immediately changes his mind.Some examples:1) Author says in chapter 17 that since players were around level 10, MC has an area that spawns mobs over level 20 as his "personal playground" because no parties would go and farm there. In the same chapter we see a group of 16 looking to hunt a 45 level Boss at the spot MC was farming.2) He has a whole chapter (ch7) on some guys wanted to rob the MC. Author states that in REBIRTH players upon death wouldn't lose experience points but only their equipment. In the whole chapter author gives us the feeling that if MC dies he would have his items + gold stolen.Later on we see that even if someone dies he wouldn't lose items necessary (ch19) . Further into the story, we see a "friend" of MC getting ganged by a group. Afraid of losing his 10% exp he shouts for MC to come to rescue (cp21). So author changes his world to make some events work that wouldn't if he was true to his words. Overall score TRASH/5 , would read again!...:3..-:^)-.-.-.-:P--:3-.--:P-..:D..:')-.-.xD-.-

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The pace of the story is good from what I've read so far. Some parts are kind of confusing but it'll be better once the author entered the editing phase. Characters are decently made too. Overall, this one has a lot of potential~

Hello author, nice work so far! I like the concept of the story and would like to see how it will progress further. Thank you for the effort and for introducing this story to us!