Honestly, this story is really good and has great appeal, of course the potential, you know your writing is very very neat, I'm not lying, it's really neat, until I really understand what is written there, keep fighting! I will read the next chapters on another occasion.

So it's not bad. The comedy it's just out of place and that makes it hard to read.

THIS NOVEL IS INSANE BRO STEPHEN KING AINT SHIT THIS MOTHERFUCKER CAME OUT WITH A STRAIGHT BANGER OH MY GODDDD READ IT RATE IT REVIEW IT THIS IS PEAK FICTION RAHHHHHHHH

Great work. Everyone should support it. Come and read it. You will enjoy every bit of it.

The novel has a promising start to what looks to be an exciting and engaging novel. The author has created a compelling cast of characters, a rich and detailed fantasy world, and a thrilling plot that is sure to keep readers on the edge of their seats. I look forward to reading the rest of the novel and seeing how Seraphina's story unfolds.

This is my first time writing something outside of school with no prompt or anything, so please be honest and provide some helpful criticism. This will not only improve my writing in the future, but also make it more enjoyable for you guys! I will try to upload a chapter 5-7 times a week!

Imma be honest it's not for me first of all my main problem with this novel is with the mc race why is it so complicated like 50% of the strongest race in the universe (whatever it is) 30% dragon and 20% human. Why even add the human I mean it's such an inferior/weak race compared to the strongest race in the universe and a fu*king dragon and with all of these dominant races the human side of him should have been so negligible it didn't even register in the system I should probably say he is getting the human side from his father and he is like 80% dragon and 20% human (if I remember correctly) and his mother is the strongest race in the universe so it doesn't make sense to me how he is still has 20% human in him and how are you going to name the novel "the first dragon god" when the mc is 30% fu*king dragon NOTE FOR THE AUTHOR: I'm sorry if i put you down by saying all this I didn't mean to put you down I was just ranting about what's been on my mind for a while now i wish you luck in your writing journey

good bookinspire anyone who likes a good love story  👌

good to start this novel it's entertaining

Pretty unique start can’t wait to read more the female lead hopefully gets a backbone but anyway pretty interesting

Just started this story a few days ago and have to say, it's overall pretty good. Starting off with the merits would obviously include the fact the the MC is a villian so if you're looking for that, you'll get it here, the power system in the story has quite a bit of potential to be pretty interesting if the author goes more into it and the side characters at least by ch 31 so far seem to be interesting enough and they're not just useless backround characters. Though it does have it's demerits, one of which would include the story pace being a bit too fast at least earlier in the novel and due to that some of the formed character relationships in the story seem a bit abrupt and out of place for a bit. Also the fact the at least as far as i've read (chapter 31), the first few numbered chapters can nearly be skipped with the only real relavance they've had in the sotry being explaing the MC's personality a bit. Though overall it's a pretty good novel so far. But i'll have to keep reading to see if it gets any better in the future as it does a some potential.

To be honest, I have never read something like that past, but I am happy I came across the book. I really liked the idea behind the story. Nicely written. I am rooting for you❣️Keep writing