I am sorry I didn't leave a full star review.But it's only the beginning so this was as high as I could go. I came from your tiktok video. I honestly really liked the idea of The Fallen Empire so I wanted to ask if you would continue that.Also if you could,please give my works a chance. It would be nice to know another writer is reading and you can maybe tell me where I went wrong and stuff.Your biggest hurdle is probably dialogue. Something I also struggle with. Atleast I saw that was the case with the four chapters I have read up until now.It would be better if each and every dialogue was unique to that person,don't always use the same tone,use descriptions to enhance the experience and feeling you can get from dialogue. Don't be afraid to use cliches as long as you don't fully rely on them. Pick a strong characteristic of your novel and run with it until the end.That's all.I am sorry I couldn't give any power stones since I ran out. I will give some tomorrow.

This seems to be a unique story, different from other repetitive stories.

Amazing book please author don't drop it.love from same country and same surname

Who is lu  yunxi and WAHT her story And we willi find out more about her and the ml too

Hey guys, I hope you will like this novel. English isn't my first language. But I am trying to improve myself in English. Also, if you have suggestions, do tell me about it.

I like the character built up, especially elyria🥺 I hope to see more heart wrenching backgrounds

I [HOPE] This novel does as well as it is doing currently.Good Novel...

this is probably the most life-changing piece of art I've ever experienced. From my current angle of thinking, It's not good or bad, it just exists. An instant favourite from me, right up there with TWIM in terms of impact. And obviously, this rating is subjective to change. Who knows, I might put it at a 0 or 10 moments from now. But THAT'S the point.

i love love love this book and hope that the author doesn't drop it and continues it this story is very good so far just hope that the author doesn't nerf the mc.

hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

If you found this story recommended to just go and read it, because the way the story start and continue to go on is one of its kind it have all the world’s fantasies , the characters description is amazing and with that you can tell that this writer is put his best to make story good for so why not sick with it to end you wont regret it!!