Draco

Overall, this is quite an enjoyable read. The writing is understandable although there are rare instances where there are mistakes. The story develops at a nice rate and the character design is pretty good as well. I personally, don't like having to read about all the races at the beginning, but that's just me. Overall, its a great novel and keep doing you thing it seems like its gonna work out for you.

Pretty average. I have finished reading Starting Contracts with Sprites. Both, this and that novel, are in the same niche with having pets for fighting. After reading 15 chapters only, I grew tired of this novel for having similar starting points with only the difference with the system abilities. It still didn't riled up my interest. I will give this an average score for at least making a solid novel but can't really get my interest to keep reading it.  Comparing it with food, you can eat it but it doesn't have that umami flavor that will keep you from having second serving.

Disclaimer not a review just a rant on dumb reviews cause I hate confrontation. I do however recommend this novel, so read it if my rant has any persuasion on you.I would give it a little less but people are rating 1 stars because they cannot read clearly. They get mad he took 3 years to break through to golden core realm, for a reference the dragon princess took about the same amount of time, with the MCs total cultivation time an average genius would be peak 1st realm about to break through 2nd (golden core is 3rd). They say he has no cultivation talent no sh i t he would have been accepted into any other peak if he had any talent. There was one person who complained about him being a little sheep and beta male since he easily accepted his master as his master when he had no idea who he was. You do realize he is the only disciple on the peak and would get all the resources right? This is said multiple of times. Even if he didn't get all the resources did you want him to leave and never cultivate or how about beg to be accepted into another peak where he has to be a janitor just to cultivate the worst technique there is (MCs master gave him the best technique there is for the sect).

A decent novel ruined by what I assume is translation issues. It hurts me in a different way that MTL. I’m just bloody confused. Author forgets level ups, doesn’t explain anything about the world leading to absolute confusion, I don’t even KNOW what his pets do! The so called ‘tomb dreams’ are complete filter with 0 explanation. They shouldn’t even be written, they are just word filter that make it even more confusing. I don’t know if some of the issues are translator or author, but it’s still a cluster fk none the less. Peak confusion was the chapter (spoiler alert) with the ape. Why tf and who tf thinks it’s alright to come kill someone over getting first place in school? Completely a force fed conflict that came out of nowhere. Novel just makes no sense and my head hurts.

I think, what do you suppose that I as a reader automatically understand all those religious Indian phrases and sentences words? you really write too confusing, instead of simulating a monk who seeks nirvana, he only resembles a madman speaking strange terms and rambling constantly. I tried, really, but this novel is a big NO, I don't understand what the protagonist is talking about and there is also no explanation for all the foreign terms and the scenes are confusing and the MC has erratic behavior without any sense

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"The plan? Just don't sleep. As simple as that. Jeric provided us with these… comfortable beddings for us to nod off. That sly fox."

I knew I was going in circles but I didn't care! I wanted him to stay! Even for just a minute... I wanted to see him, to hold him. To redo all the things we did. I wanted to do all of it again!