Started off with an eerily bang the Storyteller is so intriguing and the first chapter is everything. I feel bad for Ezra thought we're not entirely sure what he went through. Oberyn is such a cute little guy and i'm hoping for the best for this pair in this unknown 'earth'There's magic and seems to be different creatures. I wonder what fate has in store for them.The writing is easy to follow and so funny too with the interactions. Keep it up Author!

⚠️Trigger warning . If you cant accept abuse this story is not for you.. Abusive ML (I think according to the plot his the one) who thinks it's cool to teach the FL  a lesson by watching her nearly being r*ped? He treats her less than a pet.

This book is awesome from the start and tho there are a lil bit of inconsistency, the author may improve a lot soon.

A thrilling novel full of mystery. I've read the first two chapters, and I'm already eager for more. While the descriptions are somewhat weak, the strong dialogues and smooth flow of events more than make up for it.

Great story stability, I am enying the first few chapter. Keep it up , this kind of work should be contracted.

Shameless Author here!!!Alright, so I figured I'd take a moment to talk about my own novel—because, well, who else is gonna?This book isn’t gonna change your life, but it’s definitely got something going for it. If you’re into dark fantasy, with all the grit, blood, and morally gray characters, then Breaking Will of Eternity might just grab you by the throat.Go ahead, read it—or don’t. It’s your call. But just know, if you do, you're diving into a world that doesn't play nice. No hand-holding, no easy wins. Just survival.Peace Out fellas✌

This novel kind of reminds me of the old books' style of writing—everything feels rushed. The concept is great, the story is great, and the idea is amazing. The family relationships are fine, and I dislike heartless MCs, but why, just why, is it so fast-paced? Give us time to see other people's reactions and developments.You have Fang Ming and Mr. Brown creating the most advanced rifle of the time—cool, even perfect—but then, suddenly, contracts are secured, and many are sold just like that? Come on! Where are the generals' reactions? Where are the soldiers praising it? Everything happens so fast it's hard to keep up. Reading this feels like a detective novel where you have to stay completely focused, or you'll be lost entirely.

This story is the most amazing story ive ever read. I beg of you Isaiah, please make more. WE NEED MORE OF YOUR STORY. I swear your book can win the 50k.

its really good, keep going man i cant make a manga like this yeah im sorry

The action is absolutely there, I'm Loving it, and the character names are absolutely beautiful, Phineas reminds me of Phineas from Phineas and Ferb, it'sunkown if this is authors idea or not but I love that touch to the novel, thanks for the read Author San

Is this a reincarnation or does he have advanced technology knowledge?

The story has a lot of potential with its detailed game world, plot, and a protagonist facing unexpected challenges. That said, the pacing and character growth might depend on how well the author handles it. It’s a good read for fans of gaming novels. Overall, it’s a solid choice if you’re into dark, action-packed adventures with some mystery.