ECHOES OF THE FORSAKEN LYCAN

Another Forbidden romance. Hallelujah. Let's see if this one can top Tempted by your touch

the story looks good but the grammar upsets me :c, also some sudden turns in the naration, like going from he to i in the middle of the naration lowers the seriousness of the work. Some concepts are partialy badly exlplained, but lets say thats part of the story.Author should reread his work a bit more

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This really is a good novel, a mixture of reality and fantasy with some western elements. I enjoy how the MC is a “non-human” which is something I always enjoy. The writing quality is great and I can’t find many serious mistakes, although there are a few barely noticeable ones. The update schedule is beautiful, with a chapter a day(which is quite tiring to do if you run out of back up chapters, so +108 Respect)The world background is still a bit confusing to me but I believe it will be easier to understand as I keep readingThe character and story is also great. With Danika being fun to follow on her adventure.Of course if I needed to give a complaint, it is that not a lot of people have notice this novel yet, what is up with that?I hope you keep doing a great job author and I unfortunately can’t say anything to help you improve since your skills are much better than mine👍 I wish you good luck

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A good story in which the MC(up to date) instead of constantly "winning" instead experiences setbacks, and not just small setbacks, and not just small ones, but ones sufficient to force him to make decisions between the lessor of two evils. For once the MCs family are not angelic and instead have their own faults, and the MC is forced to use rationality to solve problems, with a more rare use of plot armor then most Xuanhuan stories. Unfortunately like most Xuanhuan, the MC was originally considered a waste and is often underestimated at the start, however this is minimized as the story prolongs. A unique ranking system, with only clear boundaries(i.e knight grand-knight etc) allows for an element of surprise, and the MC is not OP enough to skip through power levels, and must use his brain often to solve situations. This leads to more interesting combat, and diversity of outcomes to situations, rather than the generic power-up model most novels utilize. Unfortunately, power-ups are often gifted to the main character through common items which are only beneficial to the MC.Overall an interesting and fairly unique novel, which I would recommend others to read!

Left with no more doubts, Shirou slowed his steps and walked down the red-carpeted isle. By this point, Serafall had already spotted him and a flush was forming on her cheeks. She opened her mouth, but didn't quite know what to say so she shut it again.