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DaoistuK3OvvmNA
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I hope you enjoy it, I put many hours into it to make sure it's perfect, and I would upload a new chapter every 3 days to a week, Enjoy
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Here are my thoughts about this novel, It was pretty great to read as the author has a lot of shows, instead of telling especially on describing stuff. The worldbuilding and lore in this novel are quite fascinating as they were a lot of diverse locations and the author's description of it is well detailed. As for the character, so far they are very distinct from one another on both appearance and personality-wise. Aletha and Asahi, even though they are twins, it still pretty distinct from one another.Overall, this novel has really great potential and I can't wait for another exciting future update. That's all I have to say and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!
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The story is pretty good. The writing quality is good. I just don’t think it’s my cup of tea. The synopsis makes the MC seem OP(but he’s not). It also has one of the most annoying tropes, that being the missing family member trope.So while the synopsis may make it seem like he’s an assassin that is protected during the day and does the protecting at night it’s really a story about a boy who is to weak to find his sister and is dancing in the palm of a few powerful organizations. It doesn’t make the story bad it just adds a layer of anxiety to it that wasn’t expected from the synopsis and I tend to shy away from books like that because the looming threat is constant and makes it hard to enjoy the moments in which there isn’t a perceivable threat.
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The story is beautifully written. As an aspiring author, your skills in writing inspire me. I'm looking forward to seeing how the God duo will achieve their dream. 🙂
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I’ll be honest with you all—this lady has written brilliantly so far, no doubt about it 💯. But if she messes up in the future, I won’t hesitate to toss my words right out the window 🪟! For now, though, everything is on point, and it’s definitely worth your time. Let’s see where this journey takes us!
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Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
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amazing book nice story and chapters are wriiten
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This book is like Twilight without Bella with a hint of fear. Perfect for when you want down or experience something horrifying! Great use of words in describing what these characters are doing & what they're experiencing.
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Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline]And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
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I just started reading the story and I'm loving it already from the Prologue 🥹I like the authors writing style a lot as it brings the story to live as you read it.
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Quite an interesting story with interesting twists and plots A slow burn ❤️u200d🔥 romance novel .
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Author is not suitable to write fantasy. Completely ruined a story.
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