"When the Biggest Enemy of a Story Is Its Own Author"Reading this novel was a frustrating experience, not so much because of the story itself, but because of the author's attitude. The plot has potential, but the execution leaves much to be desired. Not because there's a lack of information, but because what is given is disorganized and poorly presented. A story should allow readers to understand its world without the author having to step into the comments section to provide impromptu explanations.I tried to express a legitimate doubt about the worldbuilding—because yes, if a random bandit has the same cultivation level as the protagonist, it's reasonable to question how strong his family really is—and instead of a clear response, I received a series of defensive, condescending, and completely unnecessary replies. The author seems to assume that if something was mentioned in a previous chapter, then any question about it is automatically invalid. As if it's the reader's fault for not memorizing every scattered detail across different chapters.But the most striking issue is the author's stance on criticism. Instead of taking the time to improve the storytelling or even acknowledging that perhaps the exposition isn't the best, they respond with an attitude that oscillates between disdain and outright denial of any possible flaw in their work. To them, if you didn’t understand something, it’s your problem. If something doesn’t make sense, it’s because "you're not thinking logically." And if you dare to ask, you might as well stop reading.It's a shame because there are interesting ideas here, but the author seems more interested in arguing with readers than in making the story more accessible. A novel should be able to stand on its own without needing the author to drop into the comments, giving explanations as if they were footnotes.If you enjoy stories where every legitimate question is met with passive-aggressive responses and the narrative demands infinite patience to connect dots the author couldn’t be bothered to structure properly, go ahead. But if you're looking for a story that explains itself without needing clarifications, you’re better off elsewhere.

it's so nice have a lot of potential, the storyline characters world building everything was well made keep up the good work.

Love this book, cracks me up non stop. Keep it coming!

looks promising hopefully it's keeps my attention because the synopsis is good 👍

august and gel, probably.......also very nice story building

Bro been reading Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse for five years now so happy to see another book by Adui I’m really interested in Shame u couldn’t continue Idle system and I’m not really feeling Empyrean Gem Master

Obligatory author rating. Give the story a try. I worked pretty hard on the world. There are multiple MC's. Including a guy who is of the same race. The race they are from is my own personal creation and is really cool in my opinion. At least comment. I'm a beginning writer so I just want some interaction on the story.

I'm really a huge fan of this author and I must say her novels never disappoints and you will be  hooked from the beginning . I've read all her other books  and i didn't drop  any half way .if you are having second thought on this book and the other books of this author , please don't 😍😍

Good Novel. The revenge in the first part was good. It also didn't contain a lot of adjectives like others. I quite like this. 5 Stars frome me.

Very informative novel, I can't wait to read all the chapters and know what really happened between Lisa and LiamThe novel gives me goosebumps though 😏

Hi fellow author!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far. Especially the deck of cards thing thats definitely a nice touchOh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable.Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best,IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!

Author's reviewThe novel explores themes of hidden power, the clash between technology and innate abilities, and the quiet journey of one man who shapes the world while staying a mystery. Alex’s story unfolds at a steady pace, rich with technological advancements, global alliances, and reflections on the unseen forces shaping the modern world