Eden of the Beginning

Translation Quality 4/5 ✖3Stability of Updates 5/5 ✖2Story Development 1/5 ✖10Character Design 1/5 ✖10World Background 1/5 ✖10The total score 0.29714285 =1/5

The story is pretty interesting, given that the story setting itself is a bit special, and it probably won't be like what other stories with extra characters present, but I wonder what will фhappen in the future.

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I like this novel quite a lot . The writing quality is excellent the story development is quite good as everything is connected, every character has different personalities so they have a hint of realism not your typical 2d although the girls easily fall for him they take time to accept the relationship.Updates are on point and currently we have not yet travelled to another world but we have got previews of what is to come .The only problem which I have is maybe my personal problem , which is mc is too soft hearted and very passive.Like I know you don't need to kill everyone everytime but sometimes you need to get proper revenge because they deserve it ,for example ,the enemies of mc almost killed him,tried to r@pe his lovers and friends many times, did way to many horrible deeds that definately deserve death but mc got soft,and mc many times is repulsed by the fact of torturing of most irredemible villains, also he leaves his lifelong opponents who destroyed his everything just because of women , honestly it's kind of irritating when you don't get proper revenge. He can easily take revenge by using his resources and lovers but he doesn't,I don't know why he is just waiting for them to do something against him. Other than my personal problem everything is amazing just hoping that mc can get a little cold hearted for his enemies. But I am sure you gonna enjoy it cause iIam still reading it .

This is a fire! , it really scared me, I never thought reading any horror stories could really scare me, thank you very much author for the amazing story. good luck on your journey.

<p>Ariana was shocked and turned to the Headmaster. "Sir? Is it customary to keep paying your respect until you have acknowledged the person?" </p>

Rufus was too embarrassed to tell the truth, so he played stupid and remained silent. In the end, Sasha decided to just drop it, blaming the incident on the head butler getting senile.

"Dagiu !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!".