a creative idea . I am really admire it, but the only problem I had that is the name is too long for reader to search for the novel. wish you to change the name into something more easier like " a observer

Author here, I believe I'm doing a pretty well job, Though I could do better. But, overall the writer(me) is doing as great as he could. Your Reviews will significantly help me, Also will motivate me to write more.Anyways, Thanks For Reading. If you like this story, Please Support the author.

hey is this amnse book 3 please reply ?????

If you want to torture yourself and spend your time crying over stupid characters who alienate their loved ones than wonder why their loved one avoids them, than this is exactly what you’re looking for.

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I am very happy to share my first attempt with you. It is very valuable for me to share your nice and critical comments. Thank you for reading.<3 King.

wow...just wow I really underestimated this novel I thought it will be full of cliche but it really proved me wrong. I advise everyone to read this if I had lots of friends I would've suggested  this.

Excellent! Expect nothing less from the lord of chakra himself.Seen his previous books, and I'm certain that this would be yet another great one.Keep moving author san😁😁

Don't lose hope try to make more better and keep it up. I really like this novel add some romance also.

okay it's a pretty good story i like system novel keep it up

very good story.... waiting for more chapters

I really like it, I want to give it higher rating but it would be unfair since there only 1 chapter currently. Looking forward for the next chapter!