Nice Plot And Good Grammar Keep It UpWaiting For The Next Chapter And More Update I like Ur World Background And The Character Description

Whoa! the story is getting more interesting. We are now heading to the Magenta, the tower of mages.

It's one of the best new novels I've read on this site, The story development could be better, but I'm sure that will come as the author grows.The characters so far seem to be well thought out , but I would love some more background info on them. Overall, this novel has a lot of potential, I'll definitely be keeping up with it hopefully until the end.

Okay, so I have been unable to read the next chapter of this story. And the reason is, no matter how I try to view it, it is showing that you have zero chapters uploaded. More then likely it is an issue with the site at the current moment. But, I just figured that I would let you know about it.

Finally, this is how a cultivation/beast taming story should be done ✔️. I'm not saying other such stories on this platform are bad, a good couple I enjoy still reading, some I have to go back to. Not to mention, my man has the fenrir bloodline 🥂🍻 we are eating good, I've been waiting for someone to use this, and I can't wait to see how you cook.

interesting book starting is typical like all other novels hope it will change later keep it up!

The story is currently in its early stages at the point that I am reading, so I can't give too much.But so far, the story seemed to be fleshing out greatly for something more interesting later on and the main character is entertaining to read.Keep it up, Author-nim!

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System genre with action focused story, MC is not stupid but more realistic. The writing style is pretty descriptive, somehow suited on the vibe of the story. Very unique so far with setting takes place in hell. Recommended to read!

Finally I was able to read a bit and it's very promising, I really like the way you write, I can only recommend this book for fans of dark fantasy !

Nice story so far, i think the author is doing an amazing job here

Maybe too early to leave this review but I absolutely love the story just from the start, please write more stories like this I will definitely read!