"This looks really promising! Excited to see where the story goes!""New novel, new journey! Wishing the author success!""Great start! Looking forward to more chapters!"

I love the story well written, it instresting

I really love the story, I wrote it with love and passion.

I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!!I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there.

I'm shamelessly giving myself 5 stars in every category! 😂 If you're enjoying the story, please don't forget to vote and show your support. Your feedback means a lot to me!

An amazing cultivation novel that doesn't feel like the carbon copy and paste horde posted on webnovel. Great grammar and pacing of the story, good sized chapters, very regular uploads. Characters feel fleshed out and aren't one dimensional cut outs based on their role in the story. So far the start of the story reminds me a little of Omniscient readers viewpoint with the fact that we essentially have two protagonists at the start. Our mc who starts off weak and the more established OP Mc who our Mc joins forces with. 5/5

It's nice and I advise  reading it.... according to the author it's his first work so some mistakes can be overlooked, but sincerely it's been a great journey reading this piece of lite6

Title ✅Cover? ✅Synopsis ✅I love the story idea as welll, if there is one thing I strongly feel that the author can improve is their paragraphs. They feel too cluttered and it would be great if you can divide the paragraphs short!!

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good story and does this story inspired from SCP Foundation ?

"I was the number 1 hero before I died and came back to life, so you can be sure I know all about heroics! Now watch as I brutally gore and dismember this group of men and women harassing another person in an alley." Hero MC not being heroic, story that seems obsessed with gore, decisions that don't make sense, world that is a hodgepodge of completely different fantasy world styles.Like let me walk you through this, he's sent to this island to take care of a swarm of monsters, dies to secret powerful entity, after learning of this the hero association... cuts his body into little pieces to "hide it" and replaces him with a different hero? And when the MC's immortality kicks in and his giblets recombine, he wakes up a month later to find himself on the island now busy and populated? So they just left his cut up pieces exactly where his body was right next to civilization? He also woke up beside his katana "Doombringer" (don't even get me started on that edginess) which means they just didn't take it?

it is a good book I highly recommend to all