Very good book with great quality in the writing . The characters are interesting and the story well paced for now.

very interesting concept, it's different in a good way, I like laid back main characters 👍

OMG 😩😩😩😩😩 MORE RN RN I SAYYYY 🤺🤺🤺 Also I totally didnt send this to about 20 people I know so uh, good luck with that  (^-^)bsdafsdhgfhkd

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

My english teacher flunked me in 12th grade, give this raw emotional rollercoaster a read and find out why she wrong. Deep reading and vivid memories.

ALL I CAN SAY ISSS This book is *fire*!🔥 The world-building? On point. The mana system? So cool. And the characters? *Chef’s kiss!* Austin’s logical, Lucian’s discovering new abilities, and Yanika? Absolute queen with that competitive spark! The tension builds perfectly—especially when the upperclassmen roll in (chills!). It’s got mystery, action, and *feels* all wrapped up in smooth storytelling. If you love magic, surprises, and characters that *pop*, this one’s a must-read!✨

Well... not for sissies. Pure lemon, deception, ntr, etc.                                                  .                                                                                       .

This book hooked me in right from the start Mc is just trying to live his life, but of course, trouble finds him on a train, of all places. And ML? definitely not someone you want sitting across from you because of the way he speaks and yes he has lots of grenades like words in his mouth🤣 I already need to know what happens next. If you like drama, revenge, teasing, enemies to lovers (that gives and shows it) and a whole lot of oh no moments, this one’s for you trust me

You adapted the writing style of Mars so well or at least the translated version. The story you have written so far is peak. I look forward to new chapter everyday, looking forward to what might come next. It would be interesting to compare your approach to what Mars would decide to do later. Please don't just drop this and disappear. I would enjoy reading this for as long as you felt like writing it even after return of Mars.

A different and cool story, there have been hints of him only like ancient language, I suppose that will be his main power…Just upload faster!!!!

It's a great novel I recommend reading this one.

The story has been wonderful thus far. It has a fresh narrative, different from many bl novels on here. Or maybe it’s just me that hasn’t read many bl novels yet 😏Either way, I’m hooked, and looking forward to how the author unfolds the twists and turns of the story.