The Girl with the Clairvoyance

Great Prologue and Story

I am writing this review at chapter 530. The book had a very strong beginning and middle, but everything seems to have changed, the story was good when it only centered around the mc and his adventures with cool kingdom building. But after the writer decided to make the whole extraction powers public, the story seems too complicated for its own good, already the mc seems like the most important/ potentially most powerful person in the whole universe. I really wish the mc was more careful with the info he divulged. At this pace with the story decision the writer has made I really feel like the mc has to deal with gods to keep the story grounded. In a way the origin expanse and the real world are 2 different stories, on the origin expanse the mc is less public and hence he can have quiet and meaningful growth. Whereas the the real world is a dumbsterfire where mc has to deal with the whole world. Yeah the writing Quality is good but I really feel that the story was really accelerated in the real world that even super powers are attacking a 19 year old and the same 19 year old is making decisions that can change the whole universe and hence normalcy can never be achieved in it without adding serious power creep. I am just angry because I am disappointed cause if taken slower the story progression could have been better.

I love interesting stories like this. The first few chapters were great, and it has alot of potential for something greater. chaRacters built like this always make for a much better experience .

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This is a copy of my other review but since it’s the same story it should be fine.Good. 🗿Author has good writing quality, updates pretty frequently, has pretty good development, character design is cool and there‘s pictures to go with most of the main characters, and goes into detail for background.

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The year before, in 629, Xuan-zan arrived in Samojiang from Tang Empire, he said that they had good horses, a strong army, good mail, strong cavalry, in Buhe ...