This is an apocalypse novel in the next level. I love the plot and the characters i also love the interactions between her and her system 💗💗💗💗💗💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💓💓💓💓💓💓💓

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Super Good . It brings me to tears just how much the author improves. He's other book is also good in terms of story telling but this one is on another level in terms of how clean and well written it is 😭😭😭

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

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The novel is enjoyable. I’m looking forward to the upcoming chapters, and I’m really curious to know whether the protagonist will truly be a villain as some expect, or if there will be a sudden shift in his character. How will his actions and relationships with other characters develop? It seems there are many surprises ahead!

Good story, the world where the story is presented is quite original and interesting.The grammar is good which makes reading much easier, as for the update frequency, the novel is updated very regularly, almost one chapter every two days.It has a rather strange beginning, let's say, but when you get used to reading the novel as a spectator and do not project yourself into it, it becomes quite an interesting read.

Great story really! Though I have a few major flaws to point out! First is plot development! It's too slow! Like super duper slow. Author created a very big world yet the story development is super slow! It would get boring as time goes by since nothing exciting comes up!  I dont have that much patience to keep reading about irrelevant minor stuffs.Second is MC's personality. It's Childish! I mean if author wants to make it something funnier with this Childish MC then it's not working, Annoying even.Now for the good parts of the story!First is the uniqueness of the story! You can rarely see an NPC with Ice Magic! Or his dungeon is frozen themed! Always fire, undead, darkness, the usual edgy stuff! His main weapon isnt even a sword! Plus points with that! Second Grammar! There's no noticeable flaws in the writing! One of the many flaws that authors have and never even improve on it! But this! For a first novel  you did well! Now! Although you have this good points, the flaws I listed will weigh more on why people stop reading, most people dont have that much of time to be patient.Goodluck!

nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it

Chapter 1 is so disconnected and disjointed from the rest of the chapters.I can't figure out the anything after chapter 1 so maybe create a natural flow 💜

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I am giving five stars because this is one of the most unique novels that I have read on this app. This book has a great concept that I can't get enough of.