Acceptance | ✓

I don't want to give any spoilers but... ??? I love it! In-flow plot and lovely Characters! It could use some punctuation corrections but apart from that... It's totally hooking! A refreshing read!

The background of story is very good, and development of the story is very good.Updating stability is so so.Translation quality is very good.Very intersting characters.Character design is perfect.

first time doing one of these so here we go. story overall is great things are all explained well and I haven't run into any problems with missing information. the way skills work is pretty interesting to say the least. world building is also fleshed out very well.biggest issue for me is the plot development is pretty slow for this type of novel. this is my personal opinion so for those who think otherwise agree to disagree. what I mean by this is how slow the progression is for the MCs growth. all in all its a great read so if you enjoy a more slow paced novel with a mmorpg genre this one will hit home for you.

This is likely the lowest score I've ever given a novel. The translation quality is fine, no issues there. The update schedule is, however shocking for a 3k+ total chapter count. At this point in time the chapters are coming out 1/week which is nearly useless.The story follows a 'This happened so I did this' type writing style. To take an example the MC finds a chain so he grabs it and runs. He finds out the chain is firmly secured to SOMETHING (doesn't check what) so he summons his dragon to pull it. That doesn't work so he does this. Then that happens and he does this. An extraordinarily boring thing to read, at least in my opinion.The character relies on bull**** luck to accomplish everything. His family is rich and his Mom owns the game. Basically this character has the thickest plot armour I've ever seen.

I nice short story with a lot of content packed into each chapter. While the writing style is good, there are no use of breaks or lines to separate content, which can cause some confusion when there are shifts in perspective during a chapter. Apart from that it is worth reading if you want a short fast paced story.Most important for me, is that it is a properly finished story, including an epilogue. A refreshing change from the usual “completed” stories due to hiatus or dropped content, usually ending on a cliffhanger to boot.

I think the story is off a pretty good start! There are grammatical and sentence structure errors here and there, but the author said he's doing his best to improve on that. Plus, despite the errors, it still does not take away from the interesting plot and storyline! I think Kairen is so far relatable and you can understand the world from his perspective. I also sympathize with him and his struggles and I can't wait to see more into this second world he has been taken into! Keep up the awesome work, author! And, readers? You should give this story a read!

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