Dear Author,I might suggest for you to tweak your 1st chapter a bit, cause it feels a bit fast paced for me. Though I haven't really finished it yet, the progression of the story is getting better as you publish more chapters. This is a good read and the author is also improving so it's good.(u2060≧u2060▽u2060≦u2060)Sincerely,Rieken

This is one intriguing novel woven out by the author. Can't wait to see how it progresses

As far as I've read, this is really good! The writing is neat and super easy to understand. If you like revenge genre, this novel is perfect for you! Keep up the great work, Author!

the story is good. I felt like like the story was following the story Swallowed Star but it took a turn from there. the writing is so so level, maybe you are a beginner,but  I am expecting something good from this novel. maybe it will turn in better in the future. you have my support bud, continue writing

Just passing by So take my 5 star review

A very fun alternative history novel, the translation quality is great. Typically I see the most issues with names but haven't noticed a single issue.

I read up to chapter 30 and enjoyed everything about it and MC's power is exactly my taste. But I have a problem with MC's character. He's too kind. I want an MC who will kill everyone if there's even the slightest disrespect to himself and his wife. I mean everyone, not just the character in question but his entire family. I feel like Adui is having trouble with this. I hope he can write a main character like that for this. Everything else is great.

Omg i could never relate more to this funny main character bruh 🤣 but ngl novel’s doing good so far! cant wait for more character development cus i know this finna eat!!! gimme more chapters !!!!

very interesting keep up the good work perfect

Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻 Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book aside from the Author 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

I realize that the character doesn't have the same personality as the beginning, but don't worry, the plot has a very logical explanation that is satisfying.

A few words —absolutely amazing. there is no need to talk about anything after that. Read the synopsis and I read a few chapters and that's it. I was hooked. Author what are you smoking plz tell me too.