War-Mother and the sin of gluttony

Writing Quality is 4.3/5 from me since the way the author describes things were easy to understand and wouldn't be much problem unless you're such a picky grammar reader.The update's stability is five, considering how the author able to update many chapters on the same day. Looking at the way the story goes fairly smoothly and logically without any hint of awkward development, I guess 4.7 is not a bad rate for the story development. Here's the unique. The MC was a gambler, but unlike any other gambler, he is surprisingly the opposite of a bad gambler, a good gambler with family being the centre of his life. He was bold enough to leave his job/hobby as a gambler to make his family's relationship goes well.The MC's wife also quite mischievous and tend to prank MC and her son. There is this moment where the MC's wife also broke out in tears upon knowing the MC's source of money was entirely came from gambling. This shows how MC's wife is another human being and not an expressionless robot, unlike in some novels.The MC's son was designed like a child of his age. Full of curiosity, childish, and reckless.The author has described the world background perfectly at the start of the novel. Hence, 5 stars from me <3

I recommend other to try this. It is really good. I am desperate to read next chapters.

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So, here is my review after going through the latest chapters, which is ten I guess.This review won't spoil you, as I am not here to fix the mistakes, but just let you know what it hasThe story is not the best I have ever seen, but with enough focus, you can understand what's going on.The writting quality is again not perfect, but far better than the average, but author tends to use some uncommon words, which with enough banging will be clear.Character are good, and have some depth which is good as far as what I aim for.Update stability is the worst feature of WN, and I never understood the point of the feature. Since the book is on a contest, author would pump out chapters daily, and may get stressed, so Author can take a rest if the quality is good. Not everyone runs after quantity. In the long run, the later winns I guess.World Background was the one of the fee things I am very strict nwith, and thus book, not till the chapter satisfied my desire for world building.Ah... Here I go, fixing errors, wasting both my and my brain cells, but if it did help, then it's good for me

Bro it’s actually really good. I love the storyline so far. But please, do me a favor; work on your grammar and spelling. The grammar is quite confusing throughout the story.

at the beginning , the story doesn't sound interesting but as the story progressed mc cultivation become profonund that's when it's interesting . especially around 700 chapter up, when mc dream into a world like modern world and Begin his live stream martial art and gather Netizen attention to cultivate heavenly merits. recommend Reading.

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