Damnnnnnnnn this shit fire AFFFF. Good story, good characters, good system. This one is going places I can tell. Can't wait for the author to drop more banger chapters.

The description or the hypnosis is very catchy. I hope that many readers will support this story after the trial. Because this story is certainly nice.

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

I would like to give a higher rating but I feel this story is more of a synopsis full of suspense and a sprinkling of philosophy. These are not bad but I think the story needs a bit more depth. More detailed descriptions of events instead of summarizing, clear definition of time frames. Clearer understanding of character relationships and dynamics. Side characters need a minimal amount of detail to flesh out their purpose in the story. I think this story is not bad but read with an introspective eye and it is more of a philosophical exercise in how humans may deal with ideas like betrayal, trust and paranoia.

WHY 5 STAR REVIEW ?  WELL DUH....ITS'S MY BOOK SO I DID DEFINITELY GIVE A 5 STAR .MY SECOND BOOK GUYS .IT SEEMS I AM GETTING BETTER RIGHT 🫣

Please update more. I want to know who she picks.

So far it's interesting 🤔 can't decide yet but I'm excited for more 😊 great work author.

a very nice and interesting story. reason I'm giving it a 4.6 star review is coz of the grammatical errors otherwise, it's a good book

Intriguing beginning and captivating chapters. I can't wait to see how this plays out. 💯

firston a serious note, the writing style is good, and the plot so far is interesting, but there's almost no chapters so i can't really judge... 5 stars coz i liked it.

put this novel for free once so people can read