I'm really looking forward to next chapter.

You have room for improvement..Will be waiting for more chapters.. hope to see you being a great person in future. I want to be your first reader for next book...keep on going dude

First of all the name is captivating, the first chapter is truly interesting and I enjoyed reading it

this is soo good. Ilike all charater speciali Keli

I'm stuck with this author and her books send help 😹😹i love your story development 😁

Hello, shameless author here! (blushes in writer's block) This is my very first BL novel, and let me tell you, I’ve been obsessed with this story for ages. I’ve dreamt about the plot, the characters, and even finished the entire thing in my sleep! (Dream me is way more productive, apparently.)Thank you for giving my little brainchild a chance and adding it to your library. You’re the real MVPs! To everyone supporting this messy, imperfect work of art—I love you all more than Theron loves gadgets!

So I will be give full stars because I did enjoy the story so far.Main issue that I could tell is complexity and depth of the characters and also their themes but it’s still an enjoyable story, the system and progression. For me personally I like to dive into a characters thought process but that’s just personal preferences.Also congrats on being signed and well done, hope the later chapters have the characters more developed

Decent but it is a slow burn with a beta male mc and you'll hit a pay wall around chapter 45.

Everything on the story is good and well planed but the problem is how slowly it’s the development it’s firm well and interesting but just the first arc took 20 chapters but all in all the story is 👍

Dear author, I want mass release. I'll give you 5* and power stone everyday. I want MC grow up quickly.                                               

how do I give a story more than 5 stars. not even kidding might be a new favorite if it keeps being good.

I loved this noval this really good 😊😊 nice story nice 🙂🙂👍👍 character abir ,😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗♥️