On the day of being condemned, the godless family was killed

The story is really good. The way the plot is given is just outstanding. I could literally feel the Emotions and horror. This was like watching a horror movie. Good work author.

Im giving this 5* just because I saw the words "A record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality". I cant wait to see this out if trial reads and into the sea of books Im reading daily 😍😍

A very poor ending to a relatively good story builtup. Only consistent activity is spraying/coughing mouthful of blood. Different ****ty looks in eyes like eyes with killing intent, cold eyes, eyes with desire to battle, eyes with aura of death and rot, ancient eyes, eyes with laughter, eyes with terror, horror, fudge... If everything was to be shown by eyes then why to talk. Author would give lot of powers to mc and then forget about them after few chapters so much so that the final battle was a bragging competition. A ****ty romance in which many unparalleled beauties are introduced but the least beautiful who has hardly spoken 10 sentences throughout the novel becomes the heroine. Author started well but then had no clue as what to write. Last book of this novel became a burden. MC is portrayed as righteous person who wipes out existence of someone only because he tried to catch a ball. Total stupid plot and basically an advertisement of authors other novels. Huge thumbs down.

Trash with m c trying to help protagonist pair with the heroines and babysitting him man this is so trash he has many way to earn money but doesn't. Has some kinda inferiority comples doesn't take things to get stronger and the lowlife author at first I though he was focusing so much on kumiko because she will be in ren's harem too but nah bruh it's brother and sisters lol and the grammar is trash and he says protagonist is dense? He is even more dense fc king dumb as s and why the fc k did he become aiko's assistant suddenly? And there many things. I'm on ch 38 now reviewing this

I am at Chapter 85 ... I just want the author to know that their are certain Chapters which is not at all needed or the contents of the chapters could have been shorted. Certain chapters is entirely composed of a single conversation between two entities ,eg the Campfire chapter or the four long chapters where the goddess shows the MC about his past , which definitely could have been shorted . Author most of us uses our passes to open the chapters , cause it's not free , And those chapters has to be worthwhile ... of course you can definitely give vivid discriptions and details and I absolutely love it ... But it's not like Chyralisis where chapters are free of Cost ... You are selling the book dear author... Gotta keep that in mind ..To everyone .. This is a good book with good English and the details of characters and world background is given vividly ... But this story is verrrrrrrrry slow paced ... Sometimes you will lose your cool as I did ... sometimes you will feel that more the Chapter is good but not worth your buck ...One can give it a shot ...And for the author.. If you want your Novel to be of High ranked , to get popular, to be acclaimed by your audience and get good pay for your work ... Please see the Chapters is worth the bang ..Once again it's a good novel .. just certain chapter messes up the Vive ..

Oneka-senpai looked at my face and then the rest of my body.

At the time things weren't all rosy between him and his wife, my stepmother Julia. They had been married for three years and didn't have a child, Julia was stressed about it and kept asking Tom my father to give her a child. Tom would always tell her to be patient that there was still time as they have only been married for a few years, all to no avail. Subsequently this became an issue and caused a lot of friction at home. it was this issue that was in Tom's mind that day at the restaurant.

I feel a force enter my head and a full blown memories of this body and plot of the world thrust into my brain, it's so painful that I feel light-headed, everything turn into foggy and I blackout.