Absolute Divine Warrior

There has never been a book that has induced so much anger into me. The writing and characters are ok, I just don't really like where the plot is going. There are a few holes/places where it was forced. Overall pretty good, but it just doesn't strike the right note with me, other people may like it and I respect that, but I don't.

The paragraphs are too large and blocky especially in the first few chapters. Other than the spacing everything else was ok, enough to pass the time.

I'm not normally someone who reviews, and the novel hasn't gotten too far in yet, however I'm so giddy with excitement at the potential of this novel. A Necromancer that's a vampire or rather will become a vampire! Enough said, you'll be missing out if you don't read this.

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Honestly, I felt this story was not worth reading. I could not understand the plot. So many complicated kinds of stuff. And the writer is going too far with perverted writings which truly makes me drop this story....

Suprisingly the translation quality is pretty good but thats pretty much everything praiseworthy for this novel.I read 5 chapters and the story is about a pet trainer with a system? (the translation calls it that) which is basicly only a translator that lets it hear the thoughts of pets and gives it missions/ rewards to for basic quest The story is pretty basic but boring because the mc has no goals/ resolutions besides becoming a pet trainer (not even something cliche as getting stronger since his parents died mysteriously)The character design? whats that? can you eat it? It doesnt describe the mc at all and only gave a basic description of the female childhood friend (fair, tail and heroic with a ponytail..)World background: Who needs that if you can have faceslaps and gender bias instead.. The female childhood friend and a man called his pet lousy and he is completely enraged at the guy and didnt even care about his friend saying the same. Hes also "forced" to faceslap at a training center because no one believes his "lousy pet" to be strong and everyone needs to comment how bad he is.The only thing (its not even mentioned properly) is that pets need 5 stars to get to the next stage

I just don't like the writing style and the jumping of povs without a single indication that it's happening, seeing the same scene twice, once for each person involved, it's just not my thing

Slow start, but I feel it works better for the detailing of the world, as well as building the characters so far. I've always liked novels involving crafting or building based abilites, so this is perfect!